The Cultivator Girl from Another World on Blue Star

The plot scenes are a bit too old-fashioned and cliche. The plot loses its readability and interest. I hope you won't be confused by old-fashioned routines. You can use a wider imagination. You can refer to "We are Different from the World's Painting Style", or "The Goddess from the End of the World", "Space Scholars Move Forward", and "Alternative God Stick". These plots are relatively novel.

(??????)?? The idea is good, the writing is a little immature, and the plot is novel, but the description is not in place, and it does not achieve the feeling of being connected and pressing step by step. The description of the heroine is a bit facial, but as a newcomer, it is good, come on ↖(^ω^)↗Support, sprinkle flowers, okay, you must stick to it.

Very nice, support(??????)?? Mom

It's "a waste of natural resources", right?