I don't understand, so it was completely wiped out in the end?
? I don't understand, what did Jiang Hui do?_? Didn't he say that he would be wiped out in ashes?
Who is Lu Hui Nian here for? Is the car accident the male protagonist?
??? Lu Hui Nian and Jiang Huai?
Like it, adding points...
The advantage is that the writing, description, dialogue, character design, and plot rhythm are all good. It's quite excellent. It doesn't feel like a newbie.
There is a lot of foreshadowing, and you can see the author's intentions, which will make readers want to continue reading.
I didn't like it a bit at the beginning, it was messy, but after reading two more chapters, I got used to the narrative rhythm.
But I felt that the plot was repetitive and dragging. One disease is cured, another disease appears, and then a third disease appears. I hope there will be many new and innovative plots.
I am your dear little angel, what am I? (^ω^)=?
The heroine is not aloof and cool, so the professor's title of "cute" can be given to her 233333
Big...
= = I wanted to complain a little bit, but I held it back.
Damn, can you change the beginning? Obviously the copywriting is quite cute to me, but why is it so noble and cold at the beginning? Even a mortal like me can't understand it after reading it several times.
The entry point of the plot made me completely confused. I understood that the male and female protagonists had a child together in a foreign land. The copywriting used it a lot, which implies that the female protagonist is from Earth, but...
I feel like I haven't fully stepped into the role yet. I've already talked about a lot of things, and I'm already confused like a mere mortal...
I hope the beginning can be changed, after all, this meme is so cute that I don't want it!
Well, this pace is too fast
I don't understand, so it was completely wiped out in the end?
? I don't understand, what did Jiang Hui do?_? Didn't he say that he would be wiped out in ashes?
Who is Lu Hui Nian here for? Is the car accident the male protagonist?
??? Lu Hui Nian and Jiang Huai?
Like it, adding points...
The advantage is that the writing, description, dialogue, character design, and plot rhythm are all good. It's quite excellent. It doesn't feel like a newbie. There is a lot of foreshadowing, and you can see the author's intentions, which will make readers want to continue reading. I didn't like it a bit at the beginning, it was messy, but after reading two more chapters, I got used to the narrative rhythm. But I felt that the plot was repetitive and dragging. One disease is cured, another disease appears, and then a third disease appears. I hope there will be many new and innovative plots.
I am your dear little angel, what am I? (^ω^)=?
The heroine is not aloof and cool, so the professor's title of "cute" can be given to her 233333
Big... = = I wanted to complain a little bit, but I held it back. Damn, can you change the beginning? Obviously the copywriting is quite cute to me, but why is it so noble and cold at the beginning? Even a mortal like me can't understand it after reading it several times. The entry point of the plot made me completely confused. I understood that the male and female protagonists had a child together in a foreign land. The copywriting used it a lot, which implies that the female protagonist is from Earth, but... I feel like I haven't fully stepped into the role yet. I've already talked about a lot of things, and I'm already confused like a mere mortal... I hope the beginning can be changed, after all, this meme is so cute that I don't want it!