When He Arrived, Dawn Was Breaking

I think Dada's novels are as good as ever, although I wasn't the first to read them as soon as they came out. I think there is nothing wrong with the heroine, she is an interesting and innovative character. Doesn't every heroine have to be great and have an IQ of 200? ! Do they all have to be top students in prestigious schools and elites in shopping malls?! Everyone loves to be strong, but in today's society, as Chu Yi lamented, success or failure is often judged by money. Only when you are rich can you be envied. Inner beautiful qualities and excellence in other aspects are found by fewer and fewer people, and fewer and fewer people care. Thank you Xia Dada for telling us this beautiful story and telling us that ordinary people can also be heroes.

The writing is great, but does it conform to her morality to never look for a job, never improve her education, and just gnaws at her old age?

How can readers know if it's good or not if they don't read it? If you encounter something unpleasant after watching it, you must say something. It is normal for an author to be angry when seeing other people's negative comments, but please don't say "Don't read it if it doesn't look good" or "Point it out?"... Readers and authors need each other. Only if you are invested in watching it will you be interested in commenting.

You can make a small movie if you change it

Those who are close to vermilion are red; those who are close to ink are black

I was not allowed to give it 2 points, so I had to give it zero points. I'm sorry. The writing depends on the rhythm, the conception, the characters, and the writing style. However, the most important thing is to look at the intention. A good story is definitely not a cliche story about a bastard who protects his body and kills all the way to achieve great achievements. That kind of momentary pleasure will turn into immediate forgetfulness in a blink of an eye. I really like this story anyway. Thank you again.

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I really like Qiao Yan, and I also like Chu Yi.

I like Qiao Yan the most. In his final round, after arresting those criminals, will he stop becoming a police officer?

I don't think the character design is broken at all, I just don't like the heroine character very much, her vision is too shallow, and she's not very grand. Sometimes I think she is just an illiterate person with great martial arts skills! Although to say illiterate is an exaggeration. But apart from being strong in martial arts and self-aware, she is indeed not outstanding. Sometimes I feel inferior. Maybe you feel a bit like me, I don't have any strong points, but I like to sincerely praise others and appreciate their strengths, and then I feel a little inferior. I feel like such a person has nothing to shine and is not worthy of being so loved by someone as good as Joe!