[Blurb]
Su Jingyuan and Lu Yueling’s relationship grew more and more ambiguous.
From copying notes for him, to saving him a seat and buying him food, to sharing a bed,
the thin paper between them was so fragile it would take only a poke to break through.
Yet he didn’t have the courage to reach out a finger.
That was, until Lu Yueling asked, “Will you be my lover for the rest of my life?”
It was only a short step, but it took them ten years to make it.
Coming soon: Temptation
Chang Shaoyang was born with a silver spoon in his mouth. He always got whatever he wanted, and his greatest achievement in life was consistently coming in first when competing with a group of rich, spoiled heirs to see who could spend the most. That was until he met Cheng Mufei.
“Eggs are too expensive, so I only boiled one. You eat it. I don’t want any.”
With a mountain of wealth at home that he refuses to touch, he works during the day and takes part-time jobs at night. To save money, he eats nothing but noodles and porridge for all three meals. The young master Chang has no trouble at all being a henpecked husband. A natural-born hooligan, shameless and impossible to reason with, he’s a total idiot!
This is the story of a spoiled rich kid who only knows how to eat, drink, and have fun,
and the desperate lengths he goes to in order to catch up with an elite man from humble beginnings.
Hooligan top x sharp-tongued, chaste bottom
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Very good, I like it very much ~ Come on ^0^~ It's rare to see a piece of literature that I like in Jinjiang
It felt like the ending was a little rushed, but the writing was very good. As for the plot, I think the comments from a few friends downstairs are very pertinent, so keep up the good work!
The writing is very good, and the plot design is very layered. But the design of the attack is really a bit thin. It's still okay in the early stage, but I always feel like I can do it without attacking in the later stage. Gong is also a man, he is not so fragile, he should take on many things, and he cannot always be the one who leads the way. Just like what happened with Gao Haiyang, no matter how much it was concealed, there wouldn't be any traces left. There is no one at home, and his father's company is also there.
The portrayal of Suffering is really well described. His painful struggle, the kind of hard work and dedication to give up everything for the sake of success is very heartbreaking, and I am not afraid of being laughed at when I say it. I really cried many times because of this. I watched it late at night, feeling a bit silly as a person cried silently in the dark. This also proves that it is really good to accept this role, and it is not a deliberate act of abuse for the sake of abuse. I am the most annoyed by this kind of abuse. To me, those abuses are just unnecessary moaning. The display of Shou's character is driven by the plot, which is something that many modern novels cannot do. Intersecting with attack, support is really great. Therefore, it also reflects the lack of attack shaping.
The more you let Gong participate in the process of the story, the richer the story will become. For example, after Gao Haiyang's hidden story was known to Gong, there would be a good opportunity to show Gong's character, and it would also be a good point of conflict. It would be a pity not to have it. Of course, you are the one who knows Wenwen best, and only you know best how to arrange it. Here are some personal opinions, I hope you don't mind.
In addition, I really like the big language, which is concise and not sloppy. This is the most basic and important thing about an article, and it is also the most difficult to do. It's really hard to be completely precise about what words to use where and what rhetoric to use when. Nowadays, the language of many articles is very colloquial. I'm not saying that it's not good, but when you look at it, you feel that it's missing a flavor.
I am really sad about the ending, because there is one less article that can be read so heartily. So, keep up the good work and look forward to you bringing us better Wenwen! ! ! If there is anything wrong with what you said, don't mind it (*/ω\*)
A very interesting story in a time of literary shortage.
After reading it, I feel there are three contradictions. The first is Xiao Gong. The more he grows up, the thinner his character becomes. It seems that everyone is growing up, but he is always silly and cheerful. Later, I no longer feel the feeling that I created in the early stage. I just feel that he is reckless and brainless, which makes people feel that he cannot stand up to Xiao Shou.
The second is Lu's father and Lu's mother. When they found out about their son's "promiscuity", they actually wanted to drag Su in first and let Xiao Shou take over the rest of their son's life. But as someone who has always loved Xiao Shou and didn't know the feelings between Gong and Shou, would he make such a hasty decision? Have they considered Xiao Shou's preferences and ideas?
The third is that Boss Fang gave up too lightly and did not have a good opportunity, which made it inconsistent with the image of obsession that has been created in the early stage.
There are only more than 200 comments... Xun Huan... Such a good article, but no one has noticed it! Make up points, make up points~
Spread flowers~ It looks good~ I'll introduce my friends~ Please work hard for new posts too~
Well. . . . Finally, I would like to support it. In fact, the whole article is quite good. All the developments in the first half are very attractive. Otherwise, I would not have read Chapter V in one go. However, it is really a bit messy at the end... The characters are a bit unclear, and the plot is a bit confusing... Well, the author can consider revising the article again? I hope to write better in the future~
Gao Haiyang and Cheng Wen are together? ? ? And they ended up liking each other? ? ? Sorry, I know I shouldn't be annoying, but to be honest, I really think this development is so confusing, it's just bizarre. . . . . .
? ! Why do I feel like something is missing? I just read the beginning of this chapter. Did they do it?
The author said that this was the first time I wrote about Danmei, and it was very well written. However, I felt that the plot couldn't be contained in the last part, it was a bit confusing, and the characters were a bit out of shape. However, the emotional repression in the previous part was well written. I really loved this part. I hope the next article will be better written.
Very good, I like it very much ~ Come on ^0^~ It's rare to see a piece of literature that I like in Jinjiang
It felt like the ending was a little rushed, but the writing was very good. As for the plot, I think the comments from a few friends downstairs are very pertinent, so keep up the good work!
The writing is very good, and the plot design is very layered. But the design of the attack is really a bit thin. It's still okay in the early stage, but I always feel like I can do it without attacking in the later stage. Gong is also a man, he is not so fragile, he should take on many things, and he cannot always be the one who leads the way. Just like what happened with Gao Haiyang, no matter how much it was concealed, there wouldn't be any traces left. There is no one at home, and his father's company is also there. The portrayal of Suffering is really well described. His painful struggle, the kind of hard work and dedication to give up everything for the sake of success is very heartbreaking, and I am not afraid of being laughed at when I say it. I really cried many times because of this. I watched it late at night, feeling a bit silly as a person cried silently in the dark. This also proves that it is really good to accept this role, and it is not a deliberate act of abuse for the sake of abuse. I am the most annoyed by this kind of abuse. To me, those abuses are just unnecessary moaning. The display of Shou's character is driven by the plot, which is something that many modern novels cannot do. Intersecting with attack, support is really great. Therefore, it also reflects the lack of attack shaping. The more you let Gong participate in the process of the story, the richer the story will become. For example, after Gao Haiyang's hidden story was known to Gong, there would be a good opportunity to show Gong's character, and it would also be a good point of conflict. It would be a pity not to have it. Of course, you are the one who knows Wenwen best, and only you know best how to arrange it. Here are some personal opinions, I hope you don't mind. In addition, I really like the big language, which is concise and not sloppy. This is the most basic and important thing about an article, and it is also the most difficult to do. It's really hard to be completely precise about what words to use where and what rhetoric to use when. Nowadays, the language of many articles is very colloquial. I'm not saying that it's not good, but when you look at it, you feel that it's missing a flavor. I am really sad about the ending, because there is one less article that can be read so heartily. So, keep up the good work and look forward to you bringing us better Wenwen! ! ! If there is anything wrong with what you said, don't mind it (*/ω\*)
A very interesting story in a time of literary shortage. After reading it, I feel there are three contradictions. The first is Xiao Gong. The more he grows up, the thinner his character becomes. It seems that everyone is growing up, but he is always silly and cheerful. Later, I no longer feel the feeling that I created in the early stage. I just feel that he is reckless and brainless, which makes people feel that he cannot stand up to Xiao Shou. The second is Lu's father and Lu's mother. When they found out about their son's "promiscuity", they actually wanted to drag Su in first and let Xiao Shou take over the rest of their son's life. But as someone who has always loved Xiao Shou and didn't know the feelings between Gong and Shou, would he make such a hasty decision? Have they considered Xiao Shou's preferences and ideas? The third is that Boss Fang gave up too lightly and did not have a good opportunity, which made it inconsistent with the image of obsession that has been created in the early stage.
There are only more than 200 comments... Xun Huan... Such a good article, but no one has noticed it! Make up points, make up points~
Spread flowers~ It looks good~ I'll introduce my friends~ Please work hard for new posts too~
Well. . . . Finally, I would like to support it. In fact, the whole article is quite good. All the developments in the first half are very attractive. Otherwise, I would not have read Chapter V in one go. However, it is really a bit messy at the end... The characters are a bit unclear, and the plot is a bit confusing... Well, the author can consider revising the article again? I hope to write better in the future~
Gao Haiyang and Cheng Wen are together? ? ? And they ended up liking each other? ? ? Sorry, I know I shouldn't be annoying, but to be honest, I really think this development is so confusing, it's just bizarre. . . . . .
? ! Why do I feel like something is missing? I just read the beginning of this chapter. Did they do it?
The author said that this was the first time I wrote about Danmei, and it was very well written. However, I felt that the plot couldn't be contained in the last part, it was a bit confusing, and the characters were a bit out of shape. However, the emotional repression in the previous part was well written. I really loved this part. I hope the next article will be better written.