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If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.
I saw this article by accident, and I really like the setting of this article, as well as the narrative method of small units and main lines. Add a V
Let's talk about heroes over wine, and the overlord will come from my generation. One represents my true love that will last forever! 1. First of all, I still don't understand why the Federation didn't kill Darcy once and for all. What aspect of Darcy is irreplaceable after the death of the priest? Did he get human resources like Tang Qi? Or is it because he is still recognized by the Beverly family after all? 2. I feel that in this comprehensive story part, Lu Ya is written in a way that is very different from him in the previous stories. It seems that all the brush strokes are used to describe how upright he is. Other than that, the character's presence seems to be nothing except the word. 3. Maybe I am relatively simple-minded and don't quite understand. I feel that it is necessary for several couples/husbands to hide some things from each other. Some of them are really unnecessary. It's very tiring to watch. How can I put it? I feel that there is no natural reason to explain why they hide so much from each other and "I'll tell you later". The only explanation I can think of is that they are not ordinary people, they are more sensitive, suspicious, cautious and smart? So if ordinary people don't feel the need to hide things, they think they can solve it themselves and don't want to tell the other party. I am too picky, but the story is indeed a good story and very interesting!
Congratulations on entering V~( ̄▽ ̄~)~
The literary review I had promised for a long time is finally online. I blame it all on my procrastination, and also because "Entering the World" is really to my liking. In order to effectively improve Mo Mo's productivity, I must publish the literary review as soon as possible, and finally produce it before I go to work! ! First of all, I am very grateful to Mo Mo for writing such a good article. I came here after reading the review of Yu'er, and I read it after I finished it. I have to say that the plot is very suitable to be read in one go. I can deeply understand how the girls who followed the series were in dire straits at the time, so I was very anxious about "Enter the World" and looked forward to their comments every day [and I really wanted someone to discuss "Enter the World" with me). When I stayed up late and read the fourth volume in one breath, it really shocked me so much that I could only leave a short comment without words. The interesting and detailed world view and the four pairs of protagonists with distinctive personalities are very impressive. At the beginning, the strong relationship between Prime Minister Baichuan and the sparks of fierce collision between the two parties directly ignited the readers' curiosity about the world. Later, through Sander, Yue Feng, Lu Ya, and Zhao Ci, their identities In the seemingly everyday story, Mo Mo continued to enrich this new world view in details, allowing readers to better understand and integrate into this world. Finally, when Liang Meng and Tang Qi appeared, a series of conspiracies chased them, and I discovered that Tang Qi was actually the key to this series of events. I am a person who basically scans the literary review at will after reading the ending. When I started reading the fourth volume, I recalled that the literary review said that Liang and Tang had opposing positions. I thought it was just a simple professional opposition relationship between ordinary LMPB and the Special Third Division. After the plot developed to a feverish stage, I found that I was still too naive. At the beginning, the noisy and fun life made people think that they were a couple with ordinary identities and a very cute and simple enemy mode. During a deliberate exchange and learning, the two discovered that both parties had another unknown identity. The two parties continued to test each other through words and observations, and the usual game-like interactions between you and me also reached a subtle and ambiguous balance. However, according to the characters of the two, this balance did not last long. It was completely broken in the jump to the sun (ding) setting (qing) tower. Under the instinct of survival and the body reflex conditions for many years, Tang Tang's fierceness disguised as a cute appearance was fully exposed under Liang Meng's joke. Even still hesitating between whether to kill or not, Liang Meng's inner impression of Tang Qi also stirred up a huge wave at this moment. In this suffocating tension, Liang Meng suddenly kissed Tang Qi. This impure kiss contained too many complex emotions, which were expressed vividly in just a few lines. The outbreak of conflicts did not make them retreat, but directly ignited the relationship between them. However, driven by their emotional instincts and security, they unconsciously explored each other, groped each other in the mystery, and in the process could not help but attract and sink each other. When Tang Qi took the first step of trusting Liang Meng, a trap directly picked out the sharpest part of their relationship, covered by the ambiguous veil. The shrouded opposing positions were directly exposed in front of them at this moment. The overwhelming information seemed to tell Tang Qi that Liang Meng betrayed him. There was no chance to explain or communicate, and they could only rely on their trust in each other. At this moment, Tang Qi suddenly appeared as if he was asking for guilt. The next second, he lay haggard and peaceful in Liang Meng's arms and fell asleep. At that time, I only had this idea, can you give me a dozen of such a cute baby? "You are different from us." Tang Qi kept repeating this sentence, and kept repeating that he would go to hell. His past identity made him yearn for the light, and he was afraid that Liang Meng would be disappointed in him because of the darkness in him, because he had seen and understood too much darkness, and could see through the dirtiest conspiracies at a glance. , This sensitivity to evil also made him deeply feel the difference between himself and Liang Meng. The light in Liang Meng nourished Tang Qi. He was like a sunflower that was tremblingly trying to break out of the soil. Wrapped in the soil was a trace of inferiority under the strong appearance that was only revealed in front of his lover. Because he didn't want to embarrass Liang Meng, Tang Qi chose to run away for the first time and said "I love you" for the first time. In the thrilling hail of bullets, Tang Qi also saw Liang Meng's determination. I also felt outside the screen that they really walked together vigorously. The sky was the main battlefield to show their affection. The first time there was an undercurrent of tension, and the second time it was unhesitating pampering and arrogance. The struggle is that the one who is favored always has no fear~ Maybe Liang Meng would have sent Tang Qi to trial for the principles he followed. His idea had not even taken shape yet. Tang Qi was directly pushed out and exposed to the public. After being criticized by the public for being a mercenary, Liang Meng gave up on his previous principles and directly changed to kissing and not caring. Only holding his wife is the last word~2333333 Of course, our Tang Qi baby is still reasonable. Returning to the Forgotten Paradise, it was a place that belonged to Tang Qi's dark history. The stress reaction after being injured, the relief after realizing that it was Liang Meng, and the trembling body when he committed the last murder in front of Liang Meng made people feel very distressed. Fortunately, Tang Qi also met someone who understood him, loved him and pampered him. The conflict and love between them is really the biggest attraction of this pair, and it is also an important reason why I like them the most. Their series of things are so dramatic. I want to see their subsequent farming (not) life. Fortunately, in "Entering the World", I can see their sweet daily life, otherwise I would really vomit blood. Of course, I like Liang Feifei and Yan Dong more. If any girl sees that I wrote such a lengthy review, she must come next door to watch "Entering the World" with me! ! All in all, this is really a good article worth reading. I feel that Mo Mo's writing is more improved than the previous articles. I look forward to Mo Mo writing better works! And I hope Mo Mo will be more motivated to write more articles after receiving my long review! ! This is my ultimate goal, hahahahahaha. This is what I see about "Zhaomu" and Liang Tang. If my view of "Zhaomu" is different from yours, yours should prevail, haha~
The writing is great, I don't know what to say [disgusted, cheers up =3=
Thank you for writing such a story, it's really great! I like every pair of cps, okay~
The author must persevere. Although you are still a little immature now, your world view and ideas are very interesting. I am optimistic about you, the next great god.
I finished reading your article a few days before the postgraduate entrance examination. Even people with obsessive-compulsive disorder feel uncomfortable.
I saw it from Tieba Amway. It's a very novel unit article. It's completely different from the stereotyped coquettish bitches nowadays. Although some settings are not very mature yet, the flaws are not hidden. I think there is a lot of room for improvement. I look forward to the new work.