I Become a Fortune-Teller in the Empire

It's illogical and confusing. Can this also be published?

Wasn't Jingjing knocked unconscious before? Why did you come out again?

I think the male protagonist is just a soy sauce guy.

So is that the law?

After reading this, I feel that the author's idea is good, but there are many problems in the text. It is indeed unclear as mentioned in many comments above. Sometimes the protagonist's perspective changes very strangely. Just a moment ago, he was interacting with this character, and the next second he felt that this character was missing. After the interaction with another person started, the previous character and the surrounding characters became the backdrop, or simply did not exist. Specifically, the idea is interesting, but the writing style is not as interesting as it should be. Instead, the plot sometimes jumps into fragments, which makes me feel uncomfortable watching it. I am not criticizing the author here, but I am offering suggestions for the text as a reader. If anyone thinks I'm looking for trouble, I have nothing to say. Because I have commented on comments like this several times, some authors and readers felt that they were unhappy with the criticism and criticized it. Some authors and readers took a look and said that such a problem did exist, and suggested that it should be filled in and improved through public discussion in the future.

The doctor said that if the wound does not heal, it will leave a scar! ——I don't know what to say here. There are all mechas in the future world. How can it not be cured or leave scars even if a little hot water is poured on it? I don't know if it's a big bug? !

I don't understand, what framework? What to put in there?

There should be other shops around this shop, are there still people there?

The style of painting has gone astray! Still want to see

The heroine's involvement in cause and effect is so baffling.