
Li Yun Serial Update Progress
利云连载进度更新
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 341k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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77Chapters
384Favorites
32Nutrient gifts
541Clicks per chapter
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After finding Jinjiang, move it from lof Incoherently, I write whatever comes to my mind. Xiaojuan and Yundou are really super cute! ! ! ! ! Especially the part where Xiaojuan is playful and breaks the sofa! ! ! ! ! There are many other appearances, such as when Skylark first appeared, he reminded Levi, "Last time, it stabbed me and then ran away and destroyed the base." There was also the story of biting Levi under Skylark's order. At first, he sucked it coquettishly and then grinded his teeth. It was really cute! ! ! ! Just watching it appear makes me faint with excitement! Then the logic, layout, and foreshadowing of the entire article are very good. In addition to Liverti's "three heartbeat stalls", leaning on the shoulder, unexpected kiss on the cheek, secret kiss, and about Skylark coming from another world, asking "What world is this" for the first time, standing on the top of a tree on a rainy day and looking into the distance as if you are in another world, seeing Yun Dou and saying "Wow, you are also in this world", and learning the language of "this world", these are all very obvious echoes Currently in the second update, the long extra chapter mentions that Skylark is good at two things, one is to bite and kill, and the other is to bandage Levi's wounds. What is the main text behind? It was also mentioned that Levi sometimes (deliberately?) Bothered Hibari to help bandage a small injury. As a result, during the second brush, I found out that Hibari's back was injured at 20M and Levi directly used alcohol to soak it (it hurts just thinking about it). When Hibari said, "... If you get injured one day, I will help you deal with the wound myself." I was thinking, ah, it turns out that Hibari sold himself at this time 233333 Speaking of extras, I have to mention Mr. Gong. Mr. Gong is so handsome! It has the same temperament as when it first appeared in the original work! It makes me a little jealous of Levi! This man can be either salty or sweet, offensive or bearable, and he is just monopolized by a little brat... In the extra chapter, Mr. Gong has to hold Levi to sleep peacefully. It echoes the first scene where Levi holds Lark while sleeping. It makes people sigh that someone is far-sighted and has planned for a long time. The most elegant and handsome thing about Mr. Gong, I think, is not fighting, etc., After all, he is 25, but when others ask whether the north will not move? He said that he would not move for the time being, and pointed his sword at the sky and said that Levi belonged to the world above. That kind of calmness, calmness, and confidence are exactly what the 25-year-old Hibari Kyoya can have. And at the end, the darkened Levi was so touching! I mourned for the 15-year-old Skylark who was still very immature and didn't understand anything about his situation. This reunion instantly reminded me of the beginning of the whole story. I was so moved that I couldn't help but cry! Speaking of fighting, I have to mention that the fighting is very smooth and very visual! Very cool! It was a surprise! My wife wrote it very carefully. The logic of the whole article is quite rigorous. The echoes are well done. You can see the gray snake line by repainting it. It is like touching the candy that was ignored before. At the same time, it is also interesting. Whether it is Yun Dou, Levi or Hibari, they are all very cute! It's really worth reading again and again! I rambled on a lot, but there seemed to be no point... Li Yun had two articles in total, both of them were written by gods. The more I read, the more addictive I became. Li Yun is so lucky to have two wives! I know that the old lady seems to be very busy and the plot is a bit stuck, but take your time! I can wait! Come on, madam! Love you (づ ̄3 ̄) づ╭?~ Continue to add A small detail was discovered in the extra story. After Levi got the three-dimensional mobile device, he thought about the way Hibari held the crutch, so he held the knife with his backhand - a reasonable explanation, but it was like hitting candy.
Hong Kong Zhen, the direct factor that turned this commander into a black man must have been Little Skylark. He was disobedient and did not care for his own body and had contact with other members (Pei Mei). Even before the commander fell in love with Skylark at 1.6 Meters tall, he was a little unhappy with Skylark's gentle attitude towards Pei Mei, right? Wwwhahaha Oops, it feels like Little Skylark can't resist it when it turns black. He probably won't drive by force. (Xu Xiaoxiao www Yossi finally returns to the real world
There is nothing more painful than the cold cycle... (Crying loudly)
I couldn't find the link on my phone, so I looked through the comments and found that I couldn't find Suisui's Weibo either. Orz, you really still need a computer?
I feel like the commander of the army will conquer the little skylark in a similar way to the big skylark, crushing it with strength or something~
This is great! I like the plot of this parallel world going around in circles the most~
Madam, come back, oh oh oh oh oh, you dragged me into this pit of Liyun and I will starve to death with no other food to eat QAQ
Suddenly, I began to imagine that the child taught by these two people... Would probably be the most powerful murder weapon in history... Fortunately, these two people cannot have children.
Hibari really left the stall to little Kyouya hhhhh I can already imagine the misery of little Kyouya being suppressed everywhere, especially when the soldier commander cut it open, it was still black and not the same number, hahaha By the way, the soldier commander is another you. I like how jealous you are. Hahahaha.
Oops, this soldier (chang) has been hacked! Chairman, do you know how badly you have tricked your other self? 2333 PS: Actually, I'm really looking forward to writing a new story about the parallel world in Sui Sui, because I'm also looking forward to it. However, I actually hope that Sui Sui will bring 27 and the others to hang out with the Giant. After all, I always feel that the Chairman and them are an inseparable group, so I actually hope that the Chairman will marry the soldier back to Feng Sheng, which is probably what will happen after the Giant incident is resolved ( ̄▽ ̄). Will I write about 27 and the others after Sui Sui?