Hello author, I think the biggest problem with this book is that when each person appears, a lot of information about that person is given to them at once, causing the reader to not be able to distinguish the characters at all. It is recommended that minor characters remain unnamed. In addition, characters with clues appear many times, introduce them bit by bit, and lay out the clues bit by bit. Don't always rely on the heroine's memories to explain what this person has done before. It is best to see what this person has done through the heroine's eyes, so that readers who read suspense stories will have a sense of involvement in solving the case.
Hello, sister, I am the store manager of Taoyao. Half of the order I placed in the store was swallowed up and it is difficult to place the order. Can I place a new order?
This is the first time I saw the free chapter Anti-Theft...
Collected it, cheers up
Sure enough, they are all so talented! Come on, hold on.
The click-through rate is good! Come on! Came here for a return visit after reading the post.
The content is wonderful, the plot is intertwined, and every word is heart-wrenching, making it unforgettable.
The writing is great O(∩_∩)O
Looking forward to the following plot ~ Received, come on ~
Looking forward to the next story.
Brother Huang's funny little sister made most of Ge Huiyun's anger. . . . . . Author, you made a typo
Hello author, I think the biggest problem with this book is that when each person appears, a lot of information about that person is given to them at once, causing the reader to not be able to distinguish the characters at all. It is recommended that minor characters remain unnamed. In addition, characters with clues appear many times, introduce them bit by bit, and lay out the clues bit by bit. Don't always rely on the heroine's memories to explain what this person has done before. It is best to see what this person has done through the heroine's eyes, so that readers who read suspense stories will have a sense of involvement in solving the case.
Hello, sister, I am the store manager of Taoyao. Half of the order I placed in the store was swallowed up and it is difficult to place the order. Can I place a new order?
This is the first time I saw the free chapter Anti-Theft...
Collected it, cheers up
Sure enough, they are all so talented! Come on, hold on.
The click-through rate is good! Come on! Came here for a return visit after reading the post.
The content is wonderful, the plot is intertwined, and every word is heart-wrenching, making it unforgettable.
The writing is great O(∩_∩)O Looking forward to the following plot ~ Received, come on ~
Looking forward to the next story.
Brother Huang's funny little sister made most of Ge Huiyun's anger. . . . . . Author, you made a typo