Chasing (Boys' Love)

Look what cool articles I found! ! !

Hum, the author is a stepmother, she is too cruel to little Ye Zi

Not bad, keep up the good work

The meme is quite cute, and the writing is at least better than that of a primary school student. There are typos in the introduction... The plot in the main text is really confusing, and it also feels too hollow and rigid to follow the plot. The writing is the first priority and the meme is of no use no matter how cute it is, so go for it!

Is this article all over?

I feel that it is not closely related to 1. It would be better if there is a transition.

Why is it so slow! ! I've been chasing you! !

Not bad, hehehe, try your best to update~(￣▽￣~)(~￣▽￣)~