Tang Xiwei, a top physics student, had just decided to return to China when, on her way to the airport, she saw emerald-green auroras appear in the American sky. Driven by a mysterious force, she shot herself.
When she woke up again, she found herself lying in a cryogenic pod, in a world two hundred years in the future... A perfect lover, the inexplicable respect of those around her, an ancient city that kept appearing in her dreams, and a strange version of herself...
What secrets lie hidden in the memories she has lost?
A few notes: 1. The author is a student, so updates are slow. This is a short story, so enter at your own risk.
2. Set against the backdrop of Cthulhu Mythos.
Wow, I really like this style. It is indeed becoming more and more mature~
"Choose District 13 - that floor is where you can buy clothes, and then we'll meet there." That area "After saying that, Tang Xiwei closed the connection." Lost connection...? "Cloud, I want to board it." Login "Use your eyes to indicate the sign she just noticed." She gestured with her eyes to look at the sign she noticed just now. "Tang Xiwei stepped forward and took a step, not knowing whether he was going up or down." Take a step forward instead of walking forward I don't know if it's an illusion, but I always feel like this chapter is a bit short (.) Come on↖(^ω^)↗
"When she was studying astronomy, she fell in love with that annoying little goblin." What does this sentence mean qaq "Then he came over and asked." Then he came over and asked "Tang Xiwei guessed that this was intentional, just to make passengers more comfortable." Broken????!!! "Pai was stunned for a moment, and then said yes." Say no thanks? This chapter is awesome!!! There are very few things that read wrong!! It feels very – very comfortable! Come on come on mua
"The first thing Tang Xiwei felt was the stimulation of light projected on her retina. Although her eyes were closed, the light still illuminated her eyelids to form stimulation, covering the original pure darkness with a layer of dark red light." Is this paragraph a bit cumbersome? Can it be deleted? "It felt like she was put into a container filled with a water-like liquid." Based on your feeling, would it be better to add a comma after it? "When she felt that her eyes had probably adapted to the light, she tried to open them." It would be better if she deleted the latter one. "A woman in her early thirties looked at her worriedly." "Looking in his early thirties" may easily misunderstand the reader at first glance. How about replacing it with "looks" or "looks"? "The woman is wearing a white coat, and her rather friendly appearance can only remind people of the clichéd adjective used to describe medical staff - angel in white." "The woman is wearing a white coat" should be changed to "the white coat on the woman" "The only drawback is that there is something similar to a hearing aid hanging from the woman's left ear, and a microphone is sticking out from her mouth." Isn't this sentence a bit strange? "Tang Xiwei felt like he had been subjected to an April Fool's Day joke that went too far." How about "I feel like I've been played an outrageous April Fool's Day joke" instead? ""Thanks. "Tang Xiwei replied politely." Should it be a polite thank you? "I don't know what kind of material the clothes on my body, like a straitjacket, even my feet are wearing." I don't know what kind of material the clothes on my body, which look like a straitjacket and even my feet are worn in, are made of. ""I don't know what to do to show it to you" towards "It seemed like there was a silent confrontation going on. " Having a silent confrontation with women Apart from these minor issues, I have to say that it is really great. It is serious but playful, and there is not much sense of violation. Come on Come on↖(^ω^)↗ p. S. Wait for me to read the long review or something carefully.
Dear, there's something I don't quite understand "He sat back in the driver's seat, stepped on the accelerator and shifted the brake gear to D, and drove away." "Leaving away from the dust" is not appropriate from Tang Xiwei's perspective, because she is in the car← Moreover, the later article describes the scene of Simonis playing with the gun, which is somewhat confusing. He plays with the gun, takes out the bullets and puts them back. This kind of complicated action is obviously not something that a person driving a car can do. Above. Fighting, come on
This intoxicating internet speed, this damn jj. When I read the article, I was really surprised. The background is grand and unrealistic rather than groundless, and the logic can withstand scrutiny. Sorry for being late!!!! But you haven't posted an update in a month, woo woo, woo woo.
It's really great, the language is mature, the plot is very smooth, the references and extensions of myths are not intentional at all, and the writing has a very special aura. There is too little content right now to make a long comment, so keep up the good work!