I Picked Up a Black

When I saw the description of Draco, I felt it was too biased... The young master is not Malfoy... Generally speaking, the young master refers specifically to the Draco played by Tom Felton in the movie, but that Draco is much better than the original due to the addition of actors. But even so, it is impossible for Malfoy to talk to the Weasley children like this... Whether it is in the movie or the novel... This should be considered a fan of a fan... It is a pity.

To be honest, as a short article, it is well written. However, if you have time to read countless fan stories, why not read the original work, even for the sake of respect for the creators of the fan art? At least the positioning of the Weasley family here is very problematic. In the early years, most of the fandoms were based on the Weasley family, especially Ron. There must be a lot of extreme things in what I got from the fanfics. In addition, no matter how good the fanfic is, it cannot be compared with the original work. No writer or writer dares to say that his sequel or fanfic is better than the original work, right? Of course, although it is recommended to read the original work, it is not mandatory to become a critic or watch it multiple times. I just hope that the characters generally won't have major problems. At the same time, when using words, I hope you can avoid using words that are obviously derogatory to describe unknown things or people. For example, the twins don't know what politeness is... This is too subjective. They are family members, very close to each other. Even if the heroine can't let go, she can still understand them, right? Didn't she herself yell to her parents to keep their voices down and not disturb her sleep? Don't have double standards in life. If you have to describe that the twins are sometimes impulsive, you can describe them as being overly joking or sometimes being overly enthusiastic. In this way, it is not derogatory, but allows readers to get that the twins are different from the heroine, and the heroine is somewhat unable to cope with them, or is not very good at dealing with them. Well, but isn't the heroine's good friend also this kind of person… If you are not a fan, from the perspective of the heroine, you may feel that this family is not very good. But as a fan, I have preconceived ideas about the character, which makes the heroine very unpleasant. So, if I'm not a fan, the article is actually very cute. But if it's a fan, it's a bit awkward.

Hahaha, my baby girl is so cute

Shouldn't my last name be Malfoy?

Would Chinese people give a foreign-sounding name like Jinny?

Cool! Xiaotian deserves to be scolded! No matter what the occasion, I always feel that Sirius is a bit self-destructive. The heroine who is a sap melee mage is so handsome.

So who is going to attack and who is going to suffer, Harry or Draco?

Being hit hard by reality. . . . Sirius is actually from the 1950s!!! It's too difficult. . . .

Draco wouldn't allow a Weasley to call him Draco

In fact, Lucius and Narcissa still care about Draco.