One, two, three, four, five, up the mountain to hunt a tiger. I didn't catch the tiger, but I did snag a tall, handsome, rich guy. How many husbands do I have? Let's count them up. Count and count again: one, two, three, four, five.
A practice piece. Thanks for stopping by! Don't worry, this lazy author's treatment may be hopeless, but I won't abandon this story!
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Why do you feel that the two subsequent incidents between Dong Shiyu and Rui Xihang were a bit stretched? Let's not talk about where Dong came from. An abandoned son who had been acquired before. Since some princess did not accept him into the backyard before, and allowing the Dong family to marry him to another person showed that they did not care about Dong. Why did he come here to kill Dong and silence him now?
The same is true here for Rui. Even if the general's mansion had a backup plan before getting married, during this period of time, they should have learned that their son was doing well after getting married. He was not as unpopular with his wife as they expected. The good days had just begun. Why did they say that they wanted to take Rui Xihang and the Rui family's granddaughter back to their hometown to live another life? He actually even prepared candidates for another marriage. Why didn't Rui marry that sergeant from the beginning?
Although I understand that I want to add more plot, such a magical twist is really inconsistent with the previous writing style.
The writing feels quite childish. . .
La la la happy! ! Come on, big new article!
Why don't you update it?
The big car drives too steadily~~Come on, come on
After reading Chapter 6, this setting of having children is a bit unscientific. If a man only has one child in his life, won't the population become smaller and smaller?
I don't know why, but there is always a sense of smugness and superiority in the following lines, a sense of superiority to you vulgar mortals. If this was a fairy tale, the heroine would already have a gap in her mind, and the inner demons would enter her body without even realizing it.
I don't like the heroine who is so soft in the heroine.
It's so confusing, I look so confused
Why do you feel that the two subsequent incidents between Dong Shiyu and Rui Xihang were a bit stretched? Let's not talk about where Dong came from. An abandoned son who had been acquired before. Since some princess did not accept him into the backyard before, and allowing the Dong family to marry him to another person showed that they did not care about Dong. Why did he come here to kill Dong and silence him now? The same is true here for Rui. Even if the general's mansion had a backup plan before getting married, during this period of time, they should have learned that their son was doing well after getting married. He was not as unpopular with his wife as they expected. The good days had just begun. Why did they say that they wanted to take Rui Xihang and the Rui family's granddaughter back to their hometown to live another life? He actually even prepared candidates for another marriage. Why didn't Rui marry that sergeant from the beginning? Although I understand that I want to add more plot, such a magical twist is really inconsistent with the previous writing style.
The writing feels quite childish. . .
La la la happy! ! Come on, big new article!
Why don't you update it?
The big car drives too steadily~~Come on, come on
After reading Chapter 6, this setting of having children is a bit unscientific. If a man only has one child in his life, won't the population become smaller and smaller?
I don't know why, but there is always a sense of smugness and superiority in the following lines, a sense of superiority to you vulgar mortals. If this was a fairy tale, the heroine would already have a gap in her mind, and the inner demons would enter her body without even realizing it.
I don't like the heroine who is so soft in the heroine.
Hahahahaha, not pregnant.