
I'll Be Your World
我来做你的世界
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 185k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
83Chapters
144Favorites
20Nutrient gifts
1.1kClicks per chapter
87Comments
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Actually, I can't understand the eagle and the rabbit at this point.
So this is Danmei!
Wow, nice looking and cheap. Sprinkle flowers! ! !
The Internet is a thread, cherish this fate
I came back during the Chinese New Year and saw that it was finished. I marked it first and then read it!
I typed a lot, but the Enter key disappeared. TAT, type again. 1. The title and copy of this article are so deceptive. How could the promised Silly Baitian and the promised nanny turn into conspiracy theories and suspense novels? 2. I was planning to give up halfway through the movie, but I really wanted to know the truth, so I finished reading it. As time goes by, the truth of the matter emerges little by little, making people unable to stop 3. Although there are still some small bugs in this article. For example, when Lin Xin sent a letter to the housekeeper, there was a person named Lin Yan, but this person did not appear later. However, the article was well written. At the beginning, the author did not write smoothly and the semantic expression was not clear. Later, he wrote better and better, and some small details can also be noticed. For example, the car accident happened three years ago, and after a year, it became four years ago. 4. In fact, I like Xie Ange more than Lin Xin. Although he is cowardly, he is surprisingly strong at times. For example, later on, although he knew that Lin Xin had cheated him, he still returned to the rental house and played with the baby. During this period, the author did not focus on describing Xie Ange's psychology, but I think he was unwilling to give up Lin Xin because he loved him. Even when Lin Xin's father told him the so-called truth, no matter how painful it was, he chose to return to the rental house and see Lin Xin. 5. Lin Xin did so much in circles. Although he did it for Xie Ange, as written in the article, was everything he did for Xie Ange really good for him? He loves Xie Ange, but thinks that he is dirty and redundant, so he stubbornly carries out his plan, hurting Xie Ange and himself. He is undoubtedly selfish. And no matter how smart he is and can set up such a big situation, I still think he is more cowardly than Xie Ange. It's really hard work for the author to persist for so long and write so many words. Hug me (^з^) I have a small suggestion, author, please change the title and copy to make it more suspenseful.
Not sweet at all TAT
The name of this group is so funny
So, are you going to torture me?
Alas... A fight without a winner...