Brothers Conflict: Love Too Deep for Long Life
兄弟战争之情深不寿
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 34k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 10y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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That, that, is it a trap?
Can the author update it quickly?
You ungrateful man, please update soon.
. . . . . . It's okay. I hope the author doesn't give up.
... Seriously, if you are writing about this kind of feeling, why don't you just write a heroine? It's amazing. I didn't even know who the protagonist was when I turned to the first chapter and then I remembered... Shiratori's life story is too boring, but Shiratori likes Masaomi, right? The author, you describe the line between Shiratori and Masaomi too heavily, making it easy to forget who the protagonist is, so I suggest the author start a new side story about Shiratori's feelings. After all, it is easy to steal the limelight in the text, and we will also get confused when reading it. And it's easy to get dazzled... After all, there are so many people named Bai. Author, you wrote that Bai Yu was picked up by the couple at the door when he was a baby, and if the two are from the same world, then Bai Niao's life experience cannot be explained clearly, right? After all, his brother was lost when he was 10 years old, or is the body that Bai Yu is using now belongs to Bai Niao's brother? So is Bai Niao's brother dead or his soul suppressed by Bai Yu? In addition, this article inexplicably reveals a pretentiousness, is it my misunderstanding...
Come on! Much better looking
Finally updated! ! ! ! It's been over a month! ! !
Heisenmei QUQ who is so bloody
More updates, thanks to the author
I'm jealous, brothers. Being jealous is good for your health. Come on.