[Cultivation] Seeking the Sword

It took me two days to read it, and I have so much to say that I don't know where to start. How to put it this way, I can sum up my feelings about this work in one sentence: the character interactions are wonderful, but the plot is slightly weak. The interaction between the protagonists is very interesting, but the overall control is slightly poor. I have seen many authors who have switched from fandom to original comics have this common problem. It would be better to write more, as the author still has great potential. The protagonist Gong traveled through his soul to the world of cultivation, and Shou is a flower of the sect. Because the parents of the protagonist's body are related to Shou, the two came into contact, Gong fell in love with Shou, and boldly expressed his love. During the experience of the two, Shou gradually fell in love with Gong, and finally involved some of their past lives, and finally he was involved in saving the world (an unsuccessful attempt). It seems to be a very ordinary plot, but it is not easy to write well. Compared with other cultivation novels, the author of this article has obviously not been abused by too many routines. Many details of the plot are very novel and eye-catching. For example, the plot of "Sect Sect Competition" is obviously much more reasonable than the "Sect Sect Competition" in many articles - first there are auditions in many small arenas, and then there is a formal competition. (The number of disciples in the sect is written. In fact, compared with some articles, the comparison is done in one day. How can a large sect have only a few disciples with thousands of disciples) Another example is the distribution of forces, the Southern Wilderness Continent where the protagonist group is located, the Central Territory where they escaped, etc. They are obviously continents in the same world, but they are fragmented and isolated from each other, and even require the use of dangerous teleportation arrays, which echoes the plot of the impending collapse of the plane. The plot that impressed me the most was the part where Shou's heart was broken. It was unexpected but reasonable. The protagonist did not come first in the end (the protagonist's cultivation and talent were realistic) The author did not give too many golden fingers to the protagonist, his appearance did not overwhelm all sentient beings, and his talent was average (four spiritual roots, later became three spiritual roots) The character creation of Shou is very successful, and the character is not broken from the beginning to the end. For this reason, I give the author 666 likes! There shouldn't be too many authors writing about the aloof Bingshan with this kind of persona! But there are a few who insist that the character design remains intact throughout the entire story! Next is what I think "why I think the interaction between the protagonists is very cute": Shou is very strong throughout the whole process, and Gong is always in a chasing state. In fact, this brings the readers into a state of chasers throughout the whole process. What is the greatest beauty of Flower of the High Mountain? It is not allowed to be climbed or folded, only viewed from a distance, but not played with. There are many stories about the loser protagonist who fails to cultivate at first, and then quickly surpasses the flower of the mountain and is included in the harem. Let's not talk about the realism (how can the loser protagonist easily surpass the favored son of heaven)? At least half of the sense of distance and beauty brought by looking up to him is lost. It is precisely because of this strength that it is so heart-wrenching when his Taoist heart is broken and he is severely injured after being surrounded. My favorite part of the whole story is the part that is actually dead but supported by a ray of obsession. It really surprised me. At first I thought it was an ordinary serious injury and amnesia, but then I suddenly realized that it was torture without hurting. It is also the most touching part of the emotional drama in the whole story. In my heart, it is like the cherry on top of the cream cake. There's no nagging, he's very honest, he says it when he likes it, he's a bit sinister, he's humorous, he's a bit straight man and doesn't know how to flirt properly. When the two of them are having extra episodes, they have a childishness that's unique to a couple in a relationship. You can really feel that these two are in love. There are so many cute things about the interaction between the two people that I can't summarize them all. You still need to explore them yourself. Now that we've talked about the advantages, let's talk about the shortcomings. The biggest shortcoming of the full text is the completeness of the overall plot. There is too much ink in the early stage, resulting in the second half taking up too little and making it appear top-heavy. Moreover, I feel that the author's writing is still a bit random. Many settings are incomplete, many plots are unclear, and the supporting characters have unclear personalities. In fact, I feel that the second half, escapes from the two characters. After death to another world, I can write more about it. After Gong's thoughts were exposed, the gradual change in the two people's relationship mode and relationship was a little abrupt. The subsequent plot development was obviously a bit anxious. Of course, if all were unfolded, the length of this article might not be 100 chapters but 300+ chapters... The author has set many realms of cultivation. However, the protagonist's foundation building and the previous ones are too detailed, and the later breakthroughs are too sloppy, which feels a bit "floating". Moreover, there are obviously several realms that are not mentioned at all. In fact, it is better to set the highest realm to become a god. In this way, the protagonist will not appear too powerless when fighting the boss to save the world in the later stage, and the integrity of the entire article will be greatly increased. There are no fixed routines for realm setting in cultivation novels. Many cultivation novels are about building a foundation, taking the Yuanying Soul and transforming into a god, and becoming an immortal. Realm setting is more suitable for long novels rather than short and medium stories. Finally, in terms of character creation, Gong's character setting actually has a big turn. The first part was very flat with no special features, and then suddenly it became three-dimensional. I remember it was probably the part where he replaced the original owner of the body but wanted to compete with his fiancée's successor. , The protagonist uses the opponent's three moves to rely on his own equipment, which gave me a feeling of "Huh? Is the protagonist someone who can do such a thing?" The protagonist Gong in the beginning of this paragraph obviously does not, but after reading the full text, in the subsequent plot development, the protagonist Gong does have such a character. It can be said that this is a turning point in the character creation of the protagonist in my impression. The explanation of the ending was really messed up. Please forgive me for not understanding the relationship between Gong and Wuming, the third life mentioned by Gong, and the sudden shift to the modern plot. Please forgive me for my stupid IQ. So what happened in the world of cultivation was the past life of modern attack and shou? Is Gong's "soul penetration" actually a dream about his past life? Or after the destruction of the world of cultivation, all the universe was annihilated and a new world (the current world) was created? Or is it the content of a game you are playing? I was a little confused and confused. The so-called open ending is to give room for imagination for the subsequent plot, rather than not explaining the ending clearly! I thought the author would provide an explanation in the extra chapter, but there was no explanation... This can be said to be the most disappointing part of the whole article for me. Although I know it's impossible, it's been a long time since I finished this article. I really hope to see the author revise it! Fill in some places or something... Overall, it's pretty good. This seems to be the author's debut novel. It's really not easy to write like this. Please keep working hard in the future! This is the first time I write such a long comment. I secretly hope that the author can read it.

Sad, I always feel that Chu Han is no longer Chu Han, he is dead

The knife hit me in the face. The author's wife knows how to cut people. My little uncle.

How can I put it this way? This is already the fourth article I have read in which my favorite protagonist dies. No one should pay attention to me. . . . Heartache The article is very good, but I am sad, my Sha Sword Fairy

It's been several years since I reviewed this book again and again. I really like them both. I'm so sad when Chu Han died. I'm still dreaming that the author can continue writing. Woohoo.

I like this couple so much... I'm rolling around... I still haven't finished the extra story and I even want to write a fanfic...

Be it reincarnation or reincarnation. I always feel that they are no longer them, and death is the most regrettable and irreversible thing after all.

This is the first time I bought the full text of V. Overall, it's pretty good, except for the ending, which I'm a little dissatisfied with.

To be honest, I was a little disappointed when I saw this. The author has been emphasizing that the past life is the past life, and this life is the present life. This is good, I like it very much, and all I want to read is the story of Gu Cheng and Chu Han. But ending like this clearly confuses their boundaries. I hope the author's extra chapter can explain it clearly and have a satisfactory result. I'll comment after I watch the extra episode

It's over so hard to leave (T_T) Wife's new article, keep up the good work!