After death, do we really become spirits? Do we really reincarnate? Do we really enter the realm of ghosts? After a massive pileup, she died. But can someone tell her why her love rival and homewrecker came along too? What?! Their souls are two halves of the same whole! What?! If I die, she dies? We all die together! Is it really okay to bind the two of us together like this? One of them has a soul, the other a spirit, and their fates were bound together long ago. Is this what they call a ghost that just won't go away? No, they don't want to be bound together. They want to... secretly fight back and take their fate into their own hands! See how they struggle through the realm of ghosts and slowly level up...
This novel is also known as A Record of Leveling Up in the Ghost Realm. (This story has two female leads, each with her own CP.) Click the link to follow the author -> <- This silly author would love your support.
The rookie author's first completed novel -> <- Please go easy on this rookie author.
A new hole dug. I hope my little angels will add it to their collections (☆▽☆) -> <- Updates start March 27.
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I opened part of it and it was quite interesting. I really wanted the male protagonist to be An He and the red-haired man. I couldn't help skipping the ending. When I realized it wasn't them, I stopped reading. However, the author's text is very good. It doesn't feel like writing for the first time at all.
After reading the title, my first reaction was to turn around and leave without wanting to read... [Collected]
I feel like the writing is very good, but the subject matter may be colder. Good luck to the author.
Okay, a suggestion about the progress of the plot: the presentation always feels a little insufficient.
Wait a minute? So is it a love triangle??!! One soul, one soul, and some madam's first wife... Ah...
... I suggest two points. First, change the cover to a more formal one. In addition, the copy needs to be bright or cute. A suitable copy can attract 50% of readers' attention. It would be even better if there is code to beautify it! Finally, you need to pay attention to the change of perspective. It is recommended to add more side descriptions or psychological descriptions, otherwise it will give people the illusion of a God's perspective. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion. Finally, keep going and don't give up. Your use of words is still very good⊙▽⊙
Came here from the forum~ I saw a relative saying that the subject matter of this article is cold. In fact, I think it's okay. The topic selection is very novel and unique, the narration is smooth and flowing, the description is contagious, and there is no problem with the writing style. In fact, I feel that very few people are able to calm down and read the article. After a glance or two, they feel that it is not attractive to them, and then forget about it, because there are so many people writing articles, and everyone reads the article with a novelty mentality. In fact, I think the happiest thing is to be able to write what I like and what everyone likes. It would be a pity if you can't do it, but there is no need to force yourself to change the subject. Everyone has their own ambitions, and it will be difficult for readers attracted by stories they don't like to resonate with you. In that case, the fun of writing may be reduced by half. Words convey the truth. Everyone's path is different. I hope you stick to what you hold in your heart and eventually meet people with the same path. Mutual encouragement.
Your writing is very good, why are you so modest? It's just that when I first read the prologue, I felt a little confused, but after the first chapter, I suddenly felt enlightened.
I have written so well since I just started writing. It is already very good. I must give it a thumbs up. Keep working hard. I believe you will write better and better!
The author's writing style is very good, but I think your suspense setting is not very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard.