The Legend of Xuan

It's very beautiful, realistic life.

Writing skills still need to be strengthened~

I admire 4 men! Wizard! Wizard!

After reading it for a day, I finally finished it all~ It's good~~ I like this novel~~

I really like this kind of heroine, and I really admire the four male protagonists who always insist on 4P and are a harmonious family.

There are loopholes and unclear sentences...

The first two chapters are pretty good, but the last two chapters don't seem to be that good. It's a bit like keeping a running account.

Not great, the content is like a running account, and the author's writing style needs to be improved.

I like it, come on, I will always pay attention to you

He picked up the bathrobe, dried me off, carried me to the bed, covered me with a quilt, and sat in front of my bed. He looked at me blankly for a long time, "Hen'er, you must be my crown princess. I will not let you go back. Once you come here, you belong to me." It's awkward to use the first person to describe other people's behavior and psychology, don't you think so? Moreover, there is basically no suspense in the article. Everyone already knows what will happen eight hundred years later. . . . It's very boring, so what's the point of looking at the back part? . . Author's reply: I understand what kiss means, ^-^