This is about a very odd boy and girl who are classmates and board at school, even living under the same roof~ The boy is the school's heartthrob, smart and handsome; the girl loves to doze off and is an average student.
Hehe, seeing that no one came to support LZ, I couldn't help but support it~
No matter what, slowly writing more than 10,000 words is an achievement. It doesn't matter if it's criticism or not~
Support!!! Sprinkle flowers~~~Come on!! (*^__^*) Hee hee...
The first chapter is so long, will it be the same in the future? I suggest you make each chapter shorter and divide it into more chapters. Also, I would like to encourage points. If your writing skills need to be improved, it is best to read more articles online. If you learn well, you may write better. Author's reply:
Because this was typed a long time ago ~ so it's very long
Thank you for your encouragement and guidance~~(*^_^*)
Xiaobaiwen? Pay attention to the difference between "said" and "said". The author's reply:
I am indeed a novice~~~~I will pay attention to what I said~~Thank you for the advice~^_^
Spread some flowers
My articles [Waiting for a flower to bloom] [Harvest my love in ancient times] [Smell the fragrance and move], please step on it!! Author's reply:
Definitely go for it~~!!
Encourage points, I am not cute. The author of this article replied:
Thank you~~~~~~m(_ _)m
Hehe, seeing that no one came to support LZ, I couldn't help but support it~ No matter what, slowly writing more than 10,000 words is an achievement. It doesn't matter if it's criticism or not~ Support!!! Sprinkle flowers~~~Come on!! (*^__^*) Hee hee...
The first chapter is so long, will it be the same in the future? I suggest you make each chapter shorter and divide it into more chapters. Also, I would like to encourage points. If your writing skills need to be improved, it is best to read more articles online. If you learn well, you may write better. Author's reply: Because this was typed a long time ago ~ so it's very long Thank you for your encouragement and guidance~~(*^_^*)
Xiaobaiwen? Pay attention to the difference between "said" and "said". The author's reply: I am indeed a novice~~~~I will pay attention to what I said~~Thank you for the advice~^_^
Spread some flowers My articles [Waiting for a flower to bloom] [Harvest my love in ancient times] [Smell the fragrance and move], please step on it!! Author's reply: Definitely go for it~~!!
Encourage points, I am not cute. The author of this article replied: Thank you~~~~~~m(_ _)m