Dragon Born in October

I don't know where you come from, why here is not good and that is not good there. . I really think it is very well written, and the author's fantasy novels are very attractive.

The imagination is weird, but the plot and characters are relatively weak, and I often watch a character dialogue and don't know what they want to say. I said before that your plot always makes people wonder what will happen next, but if it is such a random walk, it should still lack the coherence of the story and the consistency of the characters. The author's unfettered imagination is a good starting point. The level of storytelling needs to be improved, so come on!

I felt that the ending was a bit rushed and the subsequent plot was too bland and boring. The early vision is still very broad, giving people a new understanding of dragons. In the later period, the performance of Fu Luo, the big villain, made people more and more confused, thinking that there was some big conspiracy, but in the end, it was stopped in a hurry and it just became a mission plot. A Rong was tough, upright and righteous in the early stage, but towards the end, he actually turned into an official face. He expressed his dissatisfaction with Fu Luo's behavior in various cold ways, but did not take any measures to stop it. With the dragon as his companion, he didn't have to worry about anything? It's completely inconsistent with the character. In the past, you risked your life and death to slay the dragon. As a king, don't you have to seek welfare for the country and the people in the future? Just let him do whatever he wants? All in all, the subsequent plot was too bland and tasteless, and the subsequent narrative was too weak to satisfy the grand setting in the early stage. It made me unable to enter the completion state, and I always felt that it was a little bit short. Of course, the big story is quite innovative. I will keep up the good work and look forward to the new chapter.

Ah. That's a good ending, right? Everyone seeks benevolence and gets benevolence. Congratulations on the completion. Sprinkle flowers.

In the early and mid-term, I like Ajong and in the mid- and late-term, I prefer Fuluo.

Not good at commenting and difficult to express what's on his mind

Suddenly he remembered that after the mountain master woke up, he walked over to Fu Luo and looked at him. He probably knew that Fu Luo was a formidable enemy at that time? Later, he did not hesitate to use the beauty trick... Poof, Fu Luo just indulged in beauty and fell into trouble... In fact, Fu Luo also believed in Li Shan.

O__O~Come on!

It feels like there will be no room for Fu Luo in the end... But I, Meng Fu Luo and the Mountain Master... Cover their faces

Due to an unexpected situation, an old man in the family passed away and has now flown back to his hometown. I cannot update 10,000 words in the past two days. I can only update 5,000 words before Thursday, so I won't be in a hurry to finish it.