A Carefree Dream

I came here to read it. It's a short story. After reading it, I felt that you wanted to tell us too much. The writing was a bit rushed and a bit messy. Maybe I'm still a newbie, the writing method is a bit like writing an essay, it's too concrete, and the plot is a bit off-topic. Finally, this is just my personal opinion. I hope you don't mind if I don't like it. I hope it can be helpful to you, hehehe.