It's unbelievable that someone in this world could have a face bigger than the Pacific Ocean. An early-morning flight is bad enough, and I've put up with economy class, but why is there an "international cop" sitting next to me?
He takes my phone the first time we meet?
Huh? And claims to be my boyfriend?
Well... he's so handsome he outshines everyone, so having him as a boyfriend wouldn't be a bad deal...
But why does he keep getting close and then pulling away? I can't figure him out!
Shi Tou is about to tell another story, one about a "gentleman"...
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I never write long reviews But the people who read this article are actually very real. The story structure is also very rigorous This story can almost be said to be the shadow left by long-term sexual abuse in childhood. Readers who don't understand it should not read it. The storyline is really depressing In fact, Gu Yan wanted to fall in love but didn't dare to. He couldn't stop what happened in the past, but because he hated Xu Mosheng, he repeated the same perverted behavior, but he still loved Su Su in his heart. I can understand, and I'm not saying that I'm a scumbag. Gu Yan actually doesn't understand love. The love his parents gave him is twisted. He can't understand what love is. Chen Huan is not a tragic character. What he met was not a scumbag, but a male protagonist covered in scars. The male protagonist is the most tragic character in this story. He is covered in pain but cannot talk about it. If Gu Yan had not met Chen Huan to give him love and give him strength, or this tragedy would have continued. I really feel for the male protagonist. Su Su has Down syndrome. The little brother is unaware of his behavior. I don't know it is hurt. But Xu Mosheng's behavior has an impact on Gu Yan's cognition. And at an age of about ten years old, these injuries cannot be forgotten. In the end, Gu Yan was lucky to be able to find someone like Chen Huan to love him. If this happened to real people, both boys and girls would commit suicide. A word of advice to readers: those who rarely read social news should not read this novel.
Actually, the author, can you please give me a sweeter story? After reading the whole article, I can accept any three views. I just can't accept it. It's already HE. Then I'll give you another dessert. T T Poor little Huanhuan
I don't know what's wrong with me. It's okay if I don't read the ending. But after reading the ending, I'm depressed. I've read novels for so many years, and this one really touched my bottom line. I have to say that I was disgusted by the attack, especially when I saw the incident between him and Su Su at the end. I really wanted to throw the phone and couldn't suppress the anger in my heart. Maybe I was too serious, but really, what he said has been lingering in my mind from last night to now. Oh my God, I'm going crazy. Author, let's do a side story. Just tell me that Xiao Gong has been misunderstood and that he and Su Su have nothing. I'm going to collapse.
When will Shitou publish a new article?
Okay, here I go again. Last time I didn't express myself very clearly. Let's talk about it again this time. I think there is too much bloodshed, but in other people's eyes it may be an essential lead for the article (of course it is a lead in the first place). However, just because of these too many tragic leads, I couldn't breathe. It was really too depressing. Because these repressions make me unable to believe in Gu Yan's redemption in the end. Is it really like some people say that time can heal all pain? Is it really that simple? Although Gu Yan finally bravely found Chen Huan again, she always felt that it was too easy. After so many years of pain and the pitiful distortion of being exposed to Chen Huan without any reservation, could it really be that simple to let go through psychological construction? (Of course, the death of Su Su and Xu Mosheng gave Gu Yan a good opportunity to get rid of the past, and Chen Huan's light and love gave Gu Yan a lot of courage to support it. However, the author may have written a bit implicitly. It's obscure, and most of it is sad and painful. I wonder if I can make a slight change, and write the hope more clearly, not at the end, but in the earlier part of the article. Otherwise, the ending may not be able to tell what is wrong. It is not bad, but it is missing something. Wouldn't it be more reasonable to make up for it?) After all, it gave us hope in the end, but the shadow of hope is not so obvious in the whole article. Can I understand that it is Chen Huan's tolerance and love⊙ω⊙? Having said this, I would like to talk about Chen Huan. He is a very good person, and of course he is a very mentally strong person. However, I personally feel that compared to Gu Yan, his image is not that three-dimensional, so I can't quite understand why he behaves this way towards Gu Yan. . . How should I put it, although love can make a person never look back, I always feel that something is missing. I have never been able to fully understand Chen Huan's psychology compared to Gu Yan, who has been analyzed by everyone. I won't say anything about the other Gu Yan. The description is quite good. You can tell by reading the comments from readers. Ps. Dad, although I seem to be criticizing all the time, your writing is actually very good. (Look at my sincere little eyes⊙ω⊙) After all, your writing style, control of the progress of the article, and coherence are all very good. The only comment I want to make is whether more hidden hope can be added to the writing and better integrated with the ending. Yes, that's it.
First of all, congratulations on the completion! After reading the ending, I still felt a little sad. Although I guessed Xu Mosheng's knot, I didn't expect the relationship between Gu Yan and Su Su. This was a blow to those who had always liked Chen Huan. In the end, Gu Yan could not say that he loved Chen Huan. Although this story is from Chen Huan's perspective, it is mainly about Gu Yan. Gu Yan didn't want to say it anymore. The author analyzed it very clearly from various angles. His love for Su Su was mixed with the pervert who had been abused since childhood, and the complicated feelings of having no father or mother, only the only brother who belonged to him. He had sympathy for the same mother, hatred for his half-father, and twisted despair in the world. Glossy on the outside and dark on the inside. So Chen Huan, who looks like Guang, is his desire but not his love. Regarding the ending, Gu Yan once said to Chen Huan, if we were brothers, we would hold you and die together. So I always feel that he will die together with Su Su in the end. In fact, what I want to say the most is that I like Chen Huan. His love for Gu Yan has become everything to him, because when he loves, he has the desire to be loved. People who long to be loved are humble, so humble that they cannot bloom under the dust.
I already knew the ending was good, but
Gu Yan was misunderstood, poor Su Su and Gu Yan!
Boss Shitou, what I mean by fast is the development of the plot! I just felt that Gu Yan and the three of them spent several chapters leisurely in Canada, and then suddenly a lot of things happened in these chapters~ I think there are only three chapters left! How to solve the problem later? Will it be too rushed? It's really true that Daliang Yudie left like this
I thought something was weird. It turned out that I forgot that my name is Jingjing here!!! This is all Boss Shitou's fault! Disgusting Xu Mosheng! Besides, why do you have the same last name as me!!!