Respect the Supporting Characters' Intelligence [Quick Transmigration]

I kind of like the character Zero. Yes, facial control is so superficial! ! ! !

To be honest, I originally read the txt, but I thought it was well written, so I decided to buy the book to support the author. When I saw some people in the comments talking nonsense, I just said one thing: you can you up, no can no bibi

Click the claw! Hug the author big!

It's actually a sofa? ? Hello Mr. Ye Dazhuang...

Sofa~front row reminder~

Dad, you won't use other people's bodies to get intimate, right?

In my opinion, this article is actually pretty good. The writing style can only be said to be good. It's not Xiaobai's style that makes people watch it, and it's not the master's style that makes people ups and downs. It can only be said to be as plain as water, but there is nothing wrong with it in my opinion. As for the grammar and the like, I am not good at it, so I won't comment. But there are a few points I want to mention in the hope you can improve. First of all, I said this article is very bland. Although there are many interesting clips that can make people laugh, there are actually very few clips that leave a deep impression after reading it. Secondly, the plot seems to jump too fast. Whether it is the attitude of attacking versus receiving, or the process of finding the root of the system, it feels extremely abrupt. Finally, it's about the attitude of attacking. The opinions on the hands are just like those on the brain, which makes me feel like a Tom Su. As for me personally, I don't actually like the love-loving or double-cleansing thing, but I don't hate it either. I can actually accept it no matter what the setting is. But I personally have always believed that there is no question of who favors whom between attacker and sufferer. As for the protagonist, although he is Shou, he is still a man. He does not need to hide behind Gong like a woman. Shou can face danger even alone and will not cry or be weak or weak. This article is well written. The protagonist is not superior in martial arts or intelligence, but when encountering danger, he can always find a way to avert danger. As for what other people said that the protagonist was mentally retarded in the first world, I don't think so. After all, it is a new world, and a completely unknown thing is forcibly bound to you. Basically, not many people will trust him, so in the first world, or the first few worlds, it is basically to slowly test the bottom line of the system. This is normal. Before you know his bottom line and ability, the only thing you can do is to play the role he requires. But the interaction between the attacker and the opponent is too abrupt. It's just another world for the protagonist, and this kind of trust comes a little too quickly. Moreover, the change of feelings between Gong and Shou was too sudden. Although Gong could be said to have fallen in love with Shou at first sight and had been in the same world for more than 10 years, it was still too sudden. As soon as I see Shou, something goes wrong in my head, making me feel that Shou is just like a Tom Su. I always feel that no matter how high-ranking I am, my IQ drops when I see Shou, which is really ridiculous. In fact, the attack of this article is not what I said, but I feel that there seems to be a trend of becoming like this, so I would like to remind you. As for the content, this article is about filling in the holes in the world of the novel, but I feel like it's a bit off topic. I think this kind of subject matter can be written by some novels set by novices, which can be regarded as a kind of complaint against novels written by novices. Or you can intersperse some hidden clues that have been written but forgotten by the original author, and in this process, you can continue to test the system, find the loopholes in the system, and finally find the root of the system. In this, it is more common sense for attack and reception to meet, use each other, understand each other, and finally move towards trust and love. After all, in such a world, mutual plunder is allowed, and no two people can trust each other as soon as they meet. I don't think there is anything that needs to be changed about the protagonist's character, because people who practice Taoism, or people with Taoist ideas, can basically be said to have a happy-go-lucky personality. Does it need 1,000 words to become a long review? I don't know what else to write later, so I'll leave it like this for now.

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