My Little Planet

I also want to read a hundred chapters of Nancy and Sher QAQ

The last sentence, prosperous and in a trance

Compared with mainstream interstellar literature, the setting is very good, but it is a pity that it has not been written. The psychological changes of the heroine at the beginning are very realistic, and the imagination of the future interstellar time is also very novel, but the plot takes off in the last ten chapters, and the emotional changes of the male protagonist in the later period are a bit blunt, and the resolution of the conflicts with her father and various star fields is not clear. If your wife/elder is willing to reorganize the outline and write in detail, it will definitely be a good book.

Even if you dare to follow him after being tricked by Tan once, you are asking for trouble.

Why does the heroine always fail to learn well?

I have a question. Nancy couldn't see any alien creatures at first, so why could the survivors after the explosion of the earth be able to see and fight with them? If it is said that the way light is refracted is different after humans and aliens are mixed, but Nancy cannot see mechanical life. If it is said that the remnants of the earth have evolved eyes, it would be even more strange. Human beings have not changed their visual needs for thousands of years, so there is no reason why they would evolve eyes that can see other forms of appearance. . . .

In fact, there is a question. The Dream Earth is developing at a very fast speed. Does that mean that it is also heading towards the destruction of the planet at a very fast speed?

After watching Spreading Flowers~, I want to see the baby (><)

The Y chromosome is the inferior gene

It looks good, I just wish it was longer. After Chapter 60, the plot is on a rocket, it develops too fast