[Book Transmigration] My Senior Brother Is So Aloof

The writing is good and the details are well handled. There are no common Holy Father problems. In fact, some of the strategies are cold-blooded. But this is the world of cultivation I think, but there are also many problems. First of all, the most important problem is that the world view is incomplete. In fact, up to this point in the article, there is still no conclusion on whether the world is true or false. The reason why this so-called world of cultivation exists is unknown. Secondly, the rhythm is not well controlled. For example, the finale contains the most secrets but is completed very quickly. And the truth is still unclear. Another example is that some characters who have been foreshadowed actually appear and end very quickly. There are also some issues related to the improvement of the world view. In fact, the three continents are still relatively vague in my impression, and some sects are also very vague. But as mentioned at the beginning, the writing style is very good, not white, the details are handled very well, and the characters' IQs are all online. It's also true that the flaws cannot be concealed.

Nice ! ! Love it so much! ! !

Ahzhou, that string of codes sounds pretty reliable XD

I didn't understand what was going on in the end.

I like the little extras the most~ There are often things in the extras that are not mentioned in the main text

What a pity, it's not really three people, but this is not bad.

Write more daily side stories (*^o^*), don't finish it so quickly (╥╥)

I want to choose both! Are the three of them senior brothers in the middle, Mozun and Lianzhou, one in front and one behind? During the distraction period, you can control two bodies, or four people together!

I chose to wear it back. Actually, I also wanted to choose A. . .

Being empty, lonely and cold is a good time to have feelings an(☆_☆)