I like the author's article very much, but there is a very serious problem with this article, that is, the dialogue between the characters is reasonable in ancient times, but modern people don't speak like this, which makes it very strange to read. Secondly, this article is a bit like a three-good essay, which also makes people feel strange when reading. I like my wife's Python Fate and other ancient works. To be honest, my wife's skill in handling short stories is very good, but this one is really not good.
Will my wife still write new articles?
Having a relationship is so valuable
Every article is beautiful.
Hhhhhh interesting
The thin stream of water flows long, gentle and timeless~
~ So subtle
It's really good. It has a plot and feels comfortable to read. It's a rare short story.
It's quite heartwarming, a long running story with a plot, light and comfortable to read, and the writing is elegant. It's a really good short story.
The author must be very busy, and the writing speed is very fast. It has the feeling that it was written in one night, but it feels a little comfortable. After reading this article, I feel that it is gentle and to the point.
I like the author's article very much, but there is a very serious problem with this article, that is, the dialogue between the characters is reasonable in ancient times, but modern people don't speak like this, which makes it very strange to read. Secondly, this article is a bit like a three-good essay, which also makes people feel strange when reading. I like my wife's Python Fate and other ancient works. To be honest, my wife's skill in handling short stories is very good, but this one is really not good.
Will my wife still write new articles?
Having a relationship is so valuable
Every article is beautiful.
Hhhhhh interesting
The thin stream of water flows long, gentle and timeless~
~ So subtle
It's really good. It has a plot and feels comfortable to read. It's a rare short story.
It's quite heartwarming, a long running story with a plot, light and comfortable to read, and the writing is elegant. It's a really good short story.
The author must be very busy, and the writing speed is very fast. It has the feeling that it was written in one night, but it feels a little comfortable. After reading this article, I feel that it is gentle and to the point.