Across the Four Powers and Six Realms, she wanders through one dreamlike puzzle after another.
Life and death are separated by no more than the blink of an eye.
Is this an attachment left unresolved from a past life?
Or has she come to fulfill a wish carried through several lifetimes?
As the Four Powers vie for supremacy and chaos sweeps across the land, she is drawn into it time and again.
In the end, will she still yearn for the moment when blood and passion ran high, and for those eyes that ensnared her so completely?
Should she hate him, or choose to forget?
The author thinks this synopsis is terribly old-fashioned...
This novel is undergoing a major revision!
Some things don't need to be written explicitly. For example, when writing about a person's emotions, you can use metaphors and contrasts to describe it, or you can use the environment to express and set off the emotion. The combination of direct and indirect can make the article more colorful! As for the author claiming to be poor in words... This is an easy problem to solve - usually pay more attention to accumulation. When you see and hear words that you rarely use or think are good, remember them. Over time, these words will naturally come out when you write.
The description is OK. Speaking of that "dream"~ This method of using dreams is very popular. Although it's not bad, isn't it also good to be innovative and different?
It's quite interesting. I traveled through time and was still a spirit body, so there's something new~
The author's writing style is good, it feels a bit ethereal and illusory, and the description of light and shadow is more gorgeous ~ I like this It is recommended that the author at the beginning has something to say and delete it if he is writing for the first time. Some readers may be disgusted/prejudice about this and not read the works of authors who are writing for the first time. In fact, your writing is quite mature. Adding one more sentence is not worth the gain.
Come here for a visit, I'll fill the water I'm so confused. Every time I read a book, when I want to ask for an answer, I start to say that I will give you the answer in a few days. Then in the past few days, the wind and clouds have changed, and everything has become a cloud. . . . . . . . . Float away. . . . . . .
This came from the forum. I haven't read the whole article yet, so I'll comment on it first. The writing style is beautiful and exquisite. I feel that the female pig will be very bumpy in the future. It shouldn't be a sad article, right?
A bunch of flowers for you!
I didn't expect to see this article here, haha, didn't it say that the water in JJ is deep? But MS hasn't been updated for a long time, I'm lazy. If you agree with Feng, you should write it well, you are the king of traps. Ps: Guess who I am. Ps and ps: I don't know how often a certain stranger comes here now and when I can see him.
Ah, gone again? Didn't you say there is an update? Is it just an update of the previous one? I cry, when will my Shen Yue appear again
I support it to the end, even though it's very late now, and even though my dad yelled at me several times My eyes are so tired