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As Lin Ruhai lay gravely ill on the brink of death, he worried that no one would carry on the Lin family line, and that in the future, Daiyu would have no father or brothers to look after her. He decided to adopt a son from beyond the fifth degree of kinship to inherit the family estate. After carefully considering his options, he chose Lin Jinqi.
Lin Jinqi was a transmigrator. When he had read Dream of the Red Chamber, he had always felt deeply saddened by Lin Daiyu's fate. Now that he had transmigrated as her elder brother and been entrusted with Lin Ruhai's last wishes, he resolved to take his sister far away from the Jia family and away from Baoyu.
In short, this is a story about an overprotective brother rewriting Dream of the Red Chamber.
With her brother's protection, Daiyu's life is carefree and smooth.
Liang Yu: "Brother Lin, to be honest, I've admired your younger sister for a long time..."
Lin Jinqi: "You dare set your sights on my sister? We're through!"
Daiyu: "Brother, I heard that Young Master Liang won first place in yesterday's autumn hunt. He's so impressive."
Lin Jinqi: "QAQ Little sister, your brother is way more impressive than that Liang Yu kid. Aren't you going to praise me? *sob sob*"
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I feel that the author failed too much in describing the story of Zhou Sheng. He is just a supporting character among the supporting characters. It is not clear that he has any influence on the story or on the protagonist. He could have been introduced in a small space, but he spent a lot of time describing it. He is not interested in his story on the battlefield at all. I can't bear to write about him and Ming Qin. You can also say that he is despairing or depressed. The reporter said that Da Yi went to the battlefield, but is it necessary to have a scene between him and Na Ruoshui? It's completely the same as in the novel. When will women be able to join the army and be camp commanders? This scene is really disappointing, and it's too bloody. I would rather nothing happened between Zhou Sheng and Na Ruoshui, which is more disgusting than this scene. It is foreseeable that the author will also arrange some bloody scenes where the posthumous son comes to recognize his relatives after eighteen years. It is enough that Zhou Sheng and Na Ruoshui will not recognize each other at any time. Anyway, after reading this, I hit the point where I can complain. As for Daiyu writing a letter to Jia Baoyu, I really don't have the energy to complain. I don't know how the author decided on the outline. Shouldn't the main plot be the Lin family? Do other branches need to be written in such detail? See you again when we are destined. I really can't stand Zhou Sheng's description.
After reading it, I realized that I had jumped into a bottomless pit. . .
The higher the status, the greater the freedom. It is the law of the jungle and the crime of harboring a treasure. If a young doctor marries a stunning beauty, in ancient hierarchical society, most of them will not have good results, right?
The writing of the story is okay, but the characters are too dramatic and unreal, and they look like psychopaths, such as Ming Qin, who seems to have no idea why she does what she does, and Zhou Sheng, who has given up his parents and relatives for a woman he has only seen twice. Although the author made him very infatuated and his death was very touching (very dramatic), the essence of it is that he was treated like a placenta. It can basically be judged that the author simply has no experience, or is still at a dreaming age.
Why are you writing so many people named Zhou? The length is longer than that of my brother.
Why does the male protagonist talk too much? Why does the supporting role have more scenes than the protagonist?
I just want to say, why do you want to fall into this trap?
Doctors in ancient times were considered a lowly profession. There is no difference between the fifth-generation princes, father and son from a scholarly family and marrying in a medical clinic, and the modern billionaires marrying in a small restaurant.
In ancient times when ethics could kill people, Zhou Sheng's actions were not worthy of sympathy at all.
In order to write Zhou Sheng to death, it is too illogical to make the imperial army so incompetent.