"You can watch together as a group, but you can’t change the plot." Sure, got it.
"You can talk to the main characters, but you can’t take part in any of the plot." Anything goes outside the plot? Please refer to the first rule!!
"You can enter and leave at any time, but please pay according to the price list." WHAT?!! Why is it so expensive! We’ve detected that you’re a Professor fan! As a Professor fan, you’ll want to start watching him from when he was a child, and that’s the price!
All right, all right. I’ll put up with anything for the Professor.
But! What’s with this Potter?!
Why aren’t the characters following the plot?!
To everyone waiting for updates, I’m truly sorry for leaving you hanging all this time. I want to sincerely apologize again.
I actually wrote a lot in private, but it was all snippets and bonus chapters. I just couldn’t continue the main story, and halfway through I even ran off to write something else (feeling guilty).
To everyone still reading, especially Zara, I’m truly grateful! Without you, I might really never have finished writing this!!
I promise that next time I’ll finish the story before posting it. I won’t pull this kind of frustrating stunt again. I’m really sorry.
Even though the writing hasn’t been great and things haven’t gone smoothly, I’ve been happy every day I’ve spent writing and chatting with you all! Thank you again~ Mwah!
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First of all, this long review is not only written to discuss Potter's influence on Snape's life, but also to the professor. Let's talk about the professor first. If I first got into HP, it would be a Swarovski novel. Yes, I read it first without reading the original work. This greatly affected my judgment of the professor. Starting from a slightly contrasting and cute tsundere feeling, to a sinister attack, the professor's talk became more and more weird in my heart, until I saw HP shooting Sirius. She completely showed me a despicable person, a friend who would call Lily a mudblood, a trash who only regretted it because of the death of her childhood sweetheart, and a teacher who would use cold violence against some students. Later, when I fully understood this person's character, when I fully understood this person's family, and what his father and mother were like, and that he was almost killed by Sirius, but was saved by James, and that he gave the prophecy to the Dark Lord, and that he begged on his knees for Voldemort let Lily go, realized that he would spit on the ground because Gryffindor won Quidditch, realized that he would argue with Dumbledore for Harry, realized how he acted as a double agent to achieve a balance between the Order of the Phoenix and the Death Eaters, realized that he was bitten to death by Nagini, and said look The despicable relief of being at me... To use a particularly vulgar word, I was moved by this man's life. Then let's talk about the main line of this article. Because of the changes brought about by the time traveler, which are similar to the butterfly effect, through the passage of time, the two people exchange perspectives, and fall in love bit by bit, very seriously. What moved me the most is the change of the professor, the change that happened bit by bit, leaving his original destiny. As the article said, Lily is a ray of sunshine to him, and James is the unparalleled sun in his life. The foreshadowing laid by the pairing of Regulus and Lily also showed that the outcome of the war was not as tragic as I imagined - which is also an important reason why this article can achieve he. Let's talk about the writing method of this article. A large number of direct descriptions, accompanied by irreplaceable psychological subtle activities, almost perfectly show the cautious love between teenagers. Compared with the previous short story "Don't Want to Love," the writing method can be said to be more improved. Then there are the two Sippies, Sijan, who themselves are in the original work, and James Snape's seven years of study and life play a large part. Gryffindor and Slytherin themselves are very cute settings for Xipi, and coupled with the settings of lovers and enemies who fall in love and kill each other, I don't believe you when you say they don't have JQ o(≧v≦)o Moreover, Sirius tricked Snape into going to the Shrieking Shack during the full moon, and then James came to save Snape. This episode really made me think too much~(≧▽≦)/~ All the above constitute their bond, and of course, also form the foundation of this pair of CP fans. Finally, I would like to make a summary. As an extremely cool Si Zhan article, it can be said to be very good. I personally appreciate it very much. The last one (づ ̄3 ̄)づAuthor, I love you PS: Jinjiang, don't swallow my cute emoticon QAQ
Holy shit... It turned out to be my natural popular cp, and it was super delicious. I had a great time reading it in one go. My wife's writing was so great. I was moved to tears. SSJP was really cold, let alone the quality. My wife's article was so delicate and delicious. What's even more touching was that she actually wrote the reason why the plot went astray in a very logical way. It's James and Snape that I love!!! [Dance with ecstasy] The cps of the devil and the savior in the back are also delicious qwqqqqqqqq, super sweet!! It's just that the ending was a bit abrupt and left me a little confused. I hope my wife will come back and finish it when she gets inspired. It would be really great. [Happy?] Like what was said downstairs, it's really unfinished. The professor and James in the story are super cute and sweet. They keep giving out sweets and I almost eat them. [Die happily] They love each other but dare not tell each other. While denying themselves, they can't help but focus on each other. This feeling of two-way secret love is so sweet!! I still want to write more, but it seems like I can't write anything more constructive besides such mindless boasting and calling my wife [squatting down sadly] All in all, I really like my wife!!! I hope you can produce such sweet and delicious grains in the future!!! I love you and give you a big heart!!?
In fact, if I really think about it in HP, the only person who can save the professor, besides Lily, is James. (Okay, I admit it, I actually like SSSB too.) In fact, I have always felt that the real Gryffindor is a very lovable creature. It does not have so many complicated thoughts. It grins at you like an idiot with its big white teeth. The picture is as bright and warm as if it has been filtered, and it also means redemption.
That's right, James is a stag and Lily is not a doe. It is far-fetched that Snape's patronus who likes Lily in the original book is a doe - it seems that he only thinks that Lily and James are a couple from the bottom of his heart and thinks that Lily is a doe. This is very inconsistent with the thoughts of a love rival or secret admirer. In time, Snape felt that he was a doe. If he is not good enough for Lily, he would not think in his heart that Lily and his most annoying James are a very good couple. It is more reasonable for Snape to like James as stated in this article. Because James is a patronus and a stag, the patronus of Snape who wants to be with him is a doe. Think back to the sentence "always" in the original book, oh my God~
What's next, wow, madam
Register for the wife!! First of all, express your love loudly! Overall, "On Potter" is the most heartwarming and healing professorial text I have ever read! Then happily ate Sif x Jaime! Oh oh oh oh! (Although it seems that they have fallen into the cold CP pit again?) My wife's article is so sweet that it makes sense, just right, so sweet that it makes people want to fall in love (watch them) without eating late night snacks! Personally, I think the character creation of the wife is very successful! The emotional descriptions are also super delicate! The description of the scene is so accurate! Although the ending is really a stroke of genius, I think it's innocuous. The labeling is easy, isn't it? (…) Finally, continue to express my love to my wife loudly!! Wife, would you like to have a pleasant tea date and talk about the professor??
I really want to watch the next plot!!!
Relived it many times. Nice. It's just that Harry's story is not over yet.
Oh my god, this article is actually written by you. It makes me happy. The description of emotions is quite subtle and delicate. It is really a great writer that you can explain it very clearly when writing on the world line hh. The interpretation of the character Snape is quite good. I have definitely studied it many times. The description of James's character is also quite vivid. I am completely fascinated. He is obviously a "native" but has the same personality charm as a cheater, making people doubt James's identity at the beginning of the article hhhh, but the foreshadowing of how the main cp was achieved later is really surprising, and it is also the most pleasing snapecp article I have read (although it is a cold cp). Personally, I feel that the deputy cps Li The description of the smell on the body quite shows the literary power~ For the lvhp couple, it is also an important turning point in the world line from be to he. The foreshadowing is very deep. V's great feelings and h's unique personality charm under James's education are different from the original work. It has also been fully reflected (it also made V Da unforgettable hhhh) I really can't help but want to see their results as soon as possible (I am urging you to update). The writing style is so unique and attractive. I wish you a good collection and an early completion ~ I beg for hooking up ~
This is the rhythm when Lily becomes the Dark Lord's love rival!