Ping Xie Must Be Together

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I think the plot of the villain in the bottle is a bit broken, but it's still a good first time writing!

Author, the Pingxie character you wrote is broken, Tianzhen is a mother-in-law, and I feel that the dialogue between Tianzhen and the younger brother is very sensational. Tianzhen is not just a man who uses a few vulgar words. The character of the boring bottle is not able to say sensational words. Judging from the character, if Tianzhen says sensational words, the next second he will complain about himself like the male and female protagonists of TV series who say balabala. Also, it is best to change the "ah" at the end of a sentence to "ah", and don't appear too many times, it feels too girly.

The exquisite color girl An Hongdou is deeply lovesick and even more crazy than you! At first glance, it is the voice of innocence!

Together! Marry! Pingxie is the king!

I also want to see my brother's cheongsam photo!

Haha, Zhang Haike is so funny. Congratulations to Wu Xie for losing his virginity!

The plot of Wu Xie secretly kissing his younger brother was well written, I liked it very much.

Wu Xie loves Zhang Qiling! Zhang Qiling loves Wu Xie!

Brother and Tianzhen should love each other!