I feel like I'm seeing a group of people who are dragging their feet.
Will my brother have too many scenes?
Throw flowers, thank you for the big red envelope~~
It is recommended to explain clearly what is written in each part, so that it is easier for readers to understand. If you always ask others to look behind, many people will not see the back at all. This is purely a suggestion.
It is recommended that the author not put the background introduction at the back. Readers will not be able to understand the front part, and they will not be interested in reading the back part. It feels like it is all illogical and really confusing.
Is this a CP-free article?
It's a bit hard to accept that a relative I just met would act coquettishly. If my sister died suddenly and someone dressed up on my sister and acted coquettishly on me, I would definitely make her look bad. And what's with the vines?
"As soon as I stretched out my hand, I was slapped by a vine, and a bloody mark appeared on the back of my hand."
Brother, aren't you curious about where the vines came from? If this is a world with superpowers and the heroine can always control vines, then my brother may not find it strange. The question is, why is the heroine bullied like this even if she has superpowers?
PS, that man is not only a scumbag but also stupid. His daughter is with you. When nothing happens, the adults may ignore you because they are angry that the daughter is disobedient. If something happens to your daughter, you can take it out on you. It's not like in ancient times, you can go to a place where no one knows and you can't worry about trouble from your family members.
The writing is pretty good, but the name is... The title of the book is about jumping into tomb robbing, and Lin Rui is dancing into being an urban demon.
You can definitely continue to expand! Very nice! Also, it seems like I didn't see my brother's ending. Didn't he disappear? Where is the person, have you found it? And, please come up with a side story!
I feel like I'm seeing a group of people who are dragging their feet.
Will my brother have too many scenes?
Throw flowers, thank you for the big red envelope~~
It is recommended to explain clearly what is written in each part, so that it is easier for readers to understand. If you always ask others to look behind, many people will not see the back at all. This is purely a suggestion.
It is recommended that the author not put the background introduction at the back. Readers will not be able to understand the front part, and they will not be interested in reading the back part. It feels like it is all illogical and really confusing.
Is this a CP-free article?
It's a bit hard to accept that a relative I just met would act coquettishly. If my sister died suddenly and someone dressed up on my sister and acted coquettishly on me, I would definitely make her look bad. And what's with the vines?
"As soon as I stretched out my hand, I was slapped by a vine, and a bloody mark appeared on the back of my hand." Brother, aren't you curious about where the vines came from? If this is a world with superpowers and the heroine can always control vines, then my brother may not find it strange. The question is, why is the heroine bullied like this even if she has superpowers? PS, that man is not only a scumbag but also stupid. His daughter is with you. When nothing happens, the adults may ignore you because they are angry that the daughter is disobedient. If something happens to your daughter, you can take it out on you. It's not like in ancient times, you can go to a place where no one knows and you can't worry about trouble from your family members.
The writing is pretty good, but the name is... The title of the book is about jumping into tomb robbing, and Lin Rui is dancing into being an urban demon.
You can definitely continue to expand! Very nice! Also, it seems like I didn't see my brother's ending. Didn't he disappear? Where is the person, have you found it? And, please come up with a side story!