Forensic pathologist Li Hanxi accidentally transmigrates to the Yongzheng era. Faced with palace intrigue, struggles for power, and tangled affairs of the heart, she knows little about court history. But that doesn't stop Hanxi, with her stunning beauty and quick wit, from making her way into the harem step by step, watching over three thousand beauties and winning all the emperor's favor. An unfinished love from her past life will find its continuation in this one!
Respect some history, okay?
Looks great, looking forward to updates.
= =. Why do I feel that the heroine's personality changes so much? Sometimes she is smart and generous, but sometimes she is no different from an ordinary woman (a mild criticism). If she is pretending =-= there shouldn't be a psychological description of fear and uneasiness.
Han Xi's heart suddenly twitched. After praying all night, God still did not spare Xiao Cui's life. 0-0 This sentence is wrong. . . The idea of persimmons sandwiched between pears is very interesting~ Come on, author~ Pay more attention to your transitional paragraphs and other paragraphs, and your writing will make great progress~
After reading this chapter, I feel that the author's characteristics are more obvious. However, many authors have this problem. They have a good grasp of the details of character dialogue and antagonist scenes, but the macro aspect is a bit disappointing. The dialogue between the two people in these two chapters takes up a lot of space, but the author needs to know that a novel has more than just dialogue. In addition, I feel that the atmosphere is not enhanced enough.
As mentioned earlier, isn't it the normal way for the heroine to leave the palace? . It was only secretly that he came back later. Why was he suddenly summoned? 0-0
This chapter feels good The author should be better at writing rival scenes, character dialogue, etc. It's almost completely different from the previous chapter. But I also need to strengthen my excessive description 0-0
I just finished reading the first chapter and I have a lot of questions, so I will tell you directly. First is the issue of perspective At the beginning, it was a third-person girl, and then the identity of the girl was not mentioned at this time. It was a good perspective to see the Taoist priest and the concubine from the girl's perspective. Then, since it was seen from the girl's perspective, the psychological description of the Taoist priest and the concubine suddenly appeared, which was obviously unreasonable. The revelation of the girl's identity also seems very blunt, which makes readers uncomfortable. The transition in the first chapter seems very strange and not smooth, and the summary does not look like an overview, but at least it explains a lot of things clearly. In the end, the heroine's inner vow was even more abrupt... [Although Han Xi really wanted to stand out among the beautiful women and win the favor of the emperor, she was hesitant to risk her life. I just said this before, but I will move into the harem later. . How should I put it? It's an obvious inconsistency. And it didn't explain what made the heroine change her mentality. Maybe the author knows it in his heart, but at least he should give the readers an explanation.
De Fei is not simple! Nice
The great love of Qing Chuanwen, ah, requires the author to have strong historical knowledge, and in just two chapters, the author's writing power has already shown its sharpness. I look forward to the following chapters. In addition, Nalan Rongruo has great love, I look forward to it!