[Ping Xie Hei Hua] Heart Demons

Wow, the author's writing style is very good. It's beyond comparison. But the relationship between the characters is a bit messy. I remember that Qi Yu was much younger than Heixianzi, and he died in his teens. I don't know the name of Zhang Qiling's father, but he is most likely the previous patriarch, and his status is at least quite high. I know his mother's name, but It's also impossible to connect Baima with the character of the mother in the article. It doesn't matter if the name is changed. Zhang Dafoye and Er Yuehong are dozens of years apart. How did Xie Ziyang and Xie Yuchen have a relationship? They just have the same surname. Also, the article says that Huo Ling lost her parents when she was eight years old, but isn't Huo Ling's mother Mrs. Huo? Isn't Mrs. Huo still alive? Some characters have 0.000001 Points of OOC [I know my language is a bit extreme. If the author doesn't like it, I will delete it. The writing is really good. I like the overall plot changes and the character expressions? I'm going to read the next article at UConn]

It can be seen that the author worked hard! Come on!

Wow, Xiaoxie is so cute!

It's obvious that both of them are dead, so damn it, they'll be tortured to death! Stop talking and go cry!

I don't understand. Isn't my little brother dead?

I hope there won't be any abuse later (*?????)

It's so stupid. They obviously have better ones.

I finished reading this part of Ping Xie the day before yesterday. The author's ideas are very clear and the characters are well grasped. I have been able to finish reading this story because the names of the two protagonists gave me the idea to explore it to the end. This story actually has nothing to do with the original work, but I have always believed that most of us want to give them a good ending. In this article, Wu Xie is still the innocent and warm child, but Zhang Qiling is stubborn and has no compassion. It has to be said that in Zhang's heart, during the ten years he stayed in the Wu family, apart from the warmth that overflowed from the bottom of his heart due to Wu Xie, Zhang's heart was just caring in passing, and no one really paid attention to him. After he knew the truth, these "insufficient" attention turned into torture in his heart. This was his inner demon. It has to be said that because of the intertwining of coldness and warmth, his heart was contradictory and complicated. This part of Huo Xiangu can really be regarded as a bad person in a pure sense, selfish, cold, ruthless and unjust, with only interests and money in her heart. He can calmly face the story that his granddaughter was almost violated by his grandson, he can kill Wuxie's grandfather to achieve his goal, and he can refuse to lend money to save Wuxie's company after Xiuxiu's marriage is settled. All of this is in the name of doing good for others, but he is constantly forcing the story to develop in a bad direction. After reading this part, I wrote a comment in the book. At the end of the story, Wu Xie still loves, but it is a mixture of love and hate. Zhang Qiling watched the person he loved deeply suffer in his heart. He suffered even more but was unable to change, so he chose to artificially give Wu Xie an end. But the fact is that the end he thought was not the ending Wu Xie wanted. According to the old-fashioned drama, at this time, one lost his memory and the other tried to become stronger, but it didn't happen. This was another story that happened in another time and space, so they died.

Zi Yang is doing well! A warm man. What a pity, I feel sorry for him.

Are you no longer writing about themes related to stolen characters? Still want to see it!