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Random Flowers and a Dream - Random Comments on "Indiscriminate Flowers" I was so shocked by all kinds of articles in JJ that I looked through the previous official recommendation lists and accidentally stumbled into this old article. I rarely read Republican-era literature before, even the few that I did not finish. I always feel that that era should not be an era where love existed. There was hatred between the country and the family, and the world was in turmoil. How could there be room for love? It took me less than an hour to read this article from beginning to end in one go. I didn't feel depressed or burst into tears or grit my teeth and angrily write a long comment about "crying out injustice" to the protagonist like I did when I read tragic articles. It's just like there's a big thing stuck in my heart, a feeling I can't describe. The clouds are clear and the wind is clear. This word is really good to describe this article, a touch of emotion, a touch of writing, a touch of feeling. It affected me and my mood at the end of reading the article was light, with no ups and downs of joy or sadness. Articles that can influence the reader's mood (well, of course not the kind of bad articles that make you want to scold them) should be considered good articles. Then this article is undoubtedly a good article. From a linguistic point of view, the author's writing style is nothing to say. The whole article is just over 10,000 words, but it is like a Jiangnan ink painting. On the surface, the clouds look clear and the wind is clear, but the inside is rendered on the paper one stroke at a time, making it dense and unforgettable. Hmm, I really like this style. From a structural point of view, the previous article does not directly introduce the heroine's family background. The suspense is revealed step by step through the writing until the truth is revealed in the last chapter. For a short story, this is already great. But □ is right, there are still some flaws: for example, Yuan Zhimin's family background was not revealed until the last moment, leaving readers with many questions; for example, why Yuan Zhimin wanted to assassinate Hu Wenmo was not explained; and for example, the ending was very hasty, and only the endings of most people were hurriedly explained. Except for the heroine and two younger sisters and brothers, everyone else, including the hero, was "missing" or dead, and many details were not explained clearly, which always made people feel like it was anticlimactic. Let's talk about the plot. I also like the plot of this article. It always has a light feeling, especially the peaceful life of the male protagonist and the female protagonist in the first few chapters. When I read it later, I can't help but feel a lot more sad. But it seems that it is not satisfying enough. Throughout the whole story, the male protagonist and the female protagonist have no more than three or four intimate interactions: the peaceful life before marriage and just after marriage, the dance at the ball, and the final scene in prison. Isn't it a little less? If the author writes another extra story about Yuan Zhimin, maybe the article will be more brilliant. Of course, the above is purely my personal opinion, don't criticize me if you don't like it. But this article is still very well written. At least it has changed my feelings about Republican literature. Maybe I will read more of this type of article in the future. Hehe. I really like the title of this article. Spend indiscriminately. A true portrayal of that era, the feelings of family and country, the love of children, and the turmoil of troubled times. Everything flourished and bloomed like flowers, dazzling the eyes, but in the end it was lonely and decadent, leaving only a sigh and desolation. A dream of flowers blooming like wild flowers in the troubled world, allowing me to meet you, letting me fall in love with you, leaving me with memories that will never be erased for several lifetimes. Is this a calamity or fate? Maybe, only time remembers our love once. If, if life were just like the first time we met. How nice. Okay, so much nonsense, I just want to express a little bit of my feelings about "Squandering Flowers". I would like to dedicate this document to "Squandering Flowers" and the author as well as everyone who reads the article. Above.

This kind of article, this kind of story, so light is just right. The sense of vicissitudes of life does not require much description, just go through it.

I don't know what it is about, but the writing is good but there is no theme.

Woohoo~ What a great article

Novels really can't be written like this, just like photography has no theme, it's just a photo. But I like the theme very much, and I have always felt that this kind of hatred between family and country, and the sorrow of children is worth exploring.

Well,,, it makes people look so sad! , Great support!

It ended so suddenly!! It feels cruel to say that I like the male protagonist of this article and also like the large writing style.

I didn't understand it very well at first, and I didn't understand it much later either. Come on, author.

Love should be selfish, but in the face of hatred for the subjugation of the country, love is sometimes very small and can be given, but for another person, it is cruel, so it seems that you can hate, even after knowing the truth.

Yuan really loves Wanru, and she loves her without any selfishness.