This is my first time writing, and I know it isn't very good, but I still hope someone will read it and offer feedback so I can improve.
Mu Lanxin Jue pulled me into his arms and stood up, carrying me all the way into the room.
"Su Chen." Still dazed, he leaned in to kiss me.
I wrapped my arms around him and just smiled. "Be gentle, okay?"
Mu Lanxin Jue bit my earlobe. "I need to be rougher, make it hurt a little, so you'll understand."
"Understand what?" I asked.
Mu Lanxin Jue laughed softly. "Just how much I love you!"
Moonlight drifted outside the window. I thought, this is where I want to grow old.
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Very good, keep up the good work.