The General Is Above (GL)

The rhythm of this article is a bit strange When Yaoyao was choosing a husband, people from several countries came and introduced the regions and customs of other countries. She even finished the article before she even went there (⊙_⊙) I have written so many people, but Lingling's escort team has not recognized them all (the CP of the escort team came out to hand out candy a few times, and I can't remember them at all. There are too many people with similar names, so it is easy to get confused). Even passers-by and villagers in Taohua Village There are more descriptions than the escorts. The images of Lingling and Yaoyao are quite full. The other characters are almost in a few words. There are too many people. They show up when needed, and then disappear, and the text is concluded (⊙_⊙) A love affair with painting? Falcon romance? Although I still don't understand the role of Hua Hua's appearance, the image of a naughty child? Falcons can completely replace bees and butterflies (⊙_⊙) The first half of the article focuses on the love between Yaoyao and Lingling, while the second half is about running around on the road, which is so polarizing. The entanglement in the front seems to be sadistic. Although this may be true in reality, no one would read the novel if it were so realistic. The previous entanglement is suitable for people who like sadomasochistic love, but it is not ruthless enough for them. After all, the guards support their love, and Lingling is also capable of controlling her own life. The only obstacle is the throne and letting Yaoyao recognize her feelings... The later stages are a bit more exciting. Lingling is a Xiaoqiang who cannot be beaten, and Yaoyao uses clever clichés. The place where the mark is left always reminds me of puzzle games (>< ) There are really too many people. I feel that the author wrote a lot of characters and wanted to add them, but they disappeared due to the development of the plot. As a result, I couldn't remember them at all. The author can try a quick time travel story, which is not a story that one person travels from beginning to end, but a separate short story, such as "[Collection] Selected", the emotional line is easy, and it will not touch the np point.

My Yaoyao and Lingling haven't had a good time together, it's over.

What is the main line of the article? The relationship between Yaoyao and Lingling? The handsome man and his wife actually quarreled? It feels like it's the prelude to opening a dungeon again.

Lingling (an important figure) appears last (>< )

Hateful people must be pitiful T_T Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗

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Finally updated! Keep urging for updates!

7.03-7.12 What do you think →_→

Recently, there is a video saying that there are fewer and fewer people who can concentrate on telling stories. Everyone is focusing on selling characters (such as lovelive), so please come on, author↖(^ω^)↗The story is very interesting.

The spirit is awake, and there are another pair of deputy CPs (><)