A Pampered Marriage

Where can I see Duai???

It took me a few days to read this book, and then I felt a little disappointed, and I really couldn't hold back some words: Generally speaking, the author's plot lines are well designed, but no matter what kind of story, logic is the most basic and important. I think the logic of this article is really bad. For example, Guo Yuzhen, in the first chapter, showed a normal mother's reaction to Su Ming, as if Su Ming said that she would always find a job, and she comforted her by saying that she could support Su Ming. This is obviously inconsistent with the later image of a profit-seeking, patriarchal, and treating her daughter as a cash cow. According to the character traits shown in the first chapter, she should be greedy for money, but she would not be so heartless that she would curse her when her biological daughter returns later. Speaking of this, I can't help but say what Guo Yuzhen said after Jiao Yang returned, feeling that she is not as good as Su Ming at the moment. Yes, this is the place, and the unfortunate experiences of many women after "provoking" the heroine, which made me feel that the whole article has lowered its character - the relationship between the hero and heroine actually requires so many people's misfortune to be exchanged. It is really a typical example of basing one's own happiness on the pain of others! In order to make the male and female protagonists look clean and rich, the author writes almost everyone's psychology very darkly. For example, "scumbag" people become more and more scumbag, and good people don't care whether the protagonist is right or wrong. Anyway, they have the aura of the protagonist, they are right, and their happiness is taken for granted. This is obviously the legendary Mary Sue. I think a happy ending of a story should not just mean that the protagonist is happy, everyone is happy, good people have a good ending, and bad people can learn their mistakes and change. The author wrote to death the only "bad guy" in the article who knew his mistakes and could get over them, that is, the male protagonist's mother. Where did all the positive energy in society go? The author portrays many of the women in the article as vain women who sell their bodies for profit, and portrays the male protagonist as someone who doesn't care if you're right or not, but it's wrong to mess with the female protagonist anyway. I'll kill anyone who messes with the female protagonist. Where should the law be placed?! Let's talk about the extra story. The emotional scene between Jiang Yu and Qin Yao is obviously not good. After watching the whole extra story of Jiang Yu, I said that I really don't know why he suddenly fell in love with Qin Yao. Yes, love sometimes lasts only a moment, but this moment is very important. This moment also contains the reason for love. At this moment, the author is not sure. In just a few words, he said I let go of the heroine and I fell in love with you. The second male lead became a superficial person inexplicably. There is also the second episode. Ya's family, Li Mei and Xiao Ming, were very good in the main story. However, the episode included the story that their families didn't get along, so they had to separate, and then they forced Li Mei and Chen Yang to be a couple... I have to say, I was also drunk. In addition, in this article, in addition to giving the ending to the male and female protagonists, the ending to the poor male lead, and the ending to the female protagonist's best friend Li Mei, where did the others die? Where is Jiao Yang? What about Avril Lavigne? Where is Guo Yuzhen? Even if they are bad people, even if they don't deserve a good ending, then at least they have to have an ending, right? And Qin Yao, although she is only a side character, but her feelings should be taken into consideration, right? If I remember correctly, she didn't seem to have fallen in love with the lead actor yet, so she rushed to a wedding and wrote about the lead actor chatting with friends, and then announced the end... I really have nothing to say. Also, the emotional expression of the characters in this article is not very good. . . I know that the author will definitely feel uncomfortable after reading these words of mine. After all, I am also a person who has written articles and been criticized by others. (I would like to explain here that these words are my reflections as a reader after reading the article, and there is absolutely no malicious intention.) I also found out in the author's message that this was the first time the author had ever written a statement, so half of my "anger" was gone. A good article requires not only gorgeous rhetoric and a moving plot, but also good expression skills and clear logic. A good article does not need to cater to the public's taste. If the essence of your article is expressed well, it will naturally be liked by the public. Therefore, if the author is not just writing for fun, he should work harder. "Only when I examine my writing three times a day can I innovate my writing and reach a high standard of writing."

Like! Read it in one sitting! I'm going to pursue my love now!

Looking forward to Mr. Pei's story!! I read the entire book in two days!!

The articles on Jinjiang are all good!! Praise

Then the fake becomes real

Is this the end? Why do I feel like the story isn't over yet?

Spread flowers and go watch "Only Love".

I'm very curious about Mr. Pei's story.

Hahaha, Chen Yang is so pitiful