Reborn: A History of Going All Out

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Hahaha, I see the author said don't be too optimistic about cuteness. Is it too late now?

I haven't read the main text, but I've read all the extras. It's very realistic. It must be someone who has experienced similar experiences in real life. Otherwise, writing a campus romance article would not be so smooth and plain. And I read it with relish because there are two people who are so similar to my colleagues. One is like Zhan Lu, who looks like a man, has vulgar behavior and language, is not hygienic, steps on people in front of them, stabs them in the back, is not polite whether he takes advantage of the work unit or others, is lazy and slippery at work, draws in a few people to suppress others... He is always arrogant in the work unit. There is another one like Yang Yun, who is not attached to this Zhan Lu, but has to drag others with her to do everything. Especially when you see the part of Yang Yun's job interview in the article that is too graphic. When Yang Yun goes on a business trip to a nearby city, she has to be picked up by local relatives. She said that she has not been alone in a car for several years since she was in college. She always walks with her classmates, and she still smiles when Zhan Lu scares her. There really is an m wherever there is an s in this world.

Is a net worth of tens of millions considered rich? Count 10 million! It's almost like buying a luxury car, not even a luxury house! ! ! If it's 90 million, it's barely a small amount of money! ! If the heroine's entire net worth wants to invest in a famous director's new film, the director would be too small! In my opinion, a person with a net worth of tens of millions does not belong to the rich, at best he can be considered a middle class person!

Is a net worth of tens of millions considered rich? Count 10 million! It's almost like buying a luxury car, not even a luxury house! ! ! If it's 90 million, it's barely a small amount of money! ! If the heroine's entire net worth wants to invest in a famous director's new film, the director would be too small! In my opinion, a person with a net worth of tens of millions does not belong to the rich, at best he can be considered a middle class person!

... It is recommended to expand the main text and shorten the extras.

... The timeline is stretched too fast, and the changes related to the heroine in the middle and later stages are only mentioned. Instead, a lot of pen and ink are spent writing the gossip of "passers-by". Let's talk about relevance. The heroine is simply obsessed with their affairs. Let's talk about the excitement. Compared with the gossip on forums, Tianya Zhihu, etc., It is not interesting enough. The whole story is bland, not really daily life, not all the flow.

There is so much to write about a lunch box

I can't hold it in any longer. Author, did you send out the outline by mistake for the first few chapters? What are these chapters?

Sorry, I couldn't stand it until I saw the second chapter. Guan Xiaodi is 11 years old. He went to junior high school early. His speech is still so childish. At first I thought he was a 3 or 4 year old child.