"General, for the sake of the army's officers, for everyone in the Yue household, young and old, and for the peace and prosperity of the nation, don't let villains run rampant. Please put the greater good first."
My child, your father has failed you! I made you bear the burden of the Yue family's responsibilities from the moment you were born.
"Someone, inform His Majesty that the Yue family has been blessed with a boy, and ask him to bestow a name." Your father can't choose your name for you. "My son will be given the courtesy name Anran." As long as I am here, I will protect your peace and safety.
The sentences don't make sense and there are a lot of typos. It must have been written by a primary school student.
This layout is quite long, and the dialogues between the characters are all crowded together. It's really tiring to watch, and the details are still a bit lacking. Keep up the good work!
The original poster had a hard time waiting for the update.
The character of this protagonist needs to be changed. Try to be as concise as possible. Don't be too wordy, especially the inner activities. This way it can be divided into layers. Come on.
When did the princess learn martial arts... Did I miss it...? I said no at Marriage Lake before
There are two strange things here. First, this article should not be Manchu or some other ethnic minority. Why does the title Princess Princess appear at the same time? I don't understand. Shouldn't the daughter of a Han prince be a princess? Secondly, since the protagonist has undergone various transformations and seems to have said that even if the doctor diagnoses the pulse, nothing can be found, then what is the purpose of having Liu Yan'er accompany him? ? ?
Couldn't the layout be better? Looks so tired, pass
These two awkward little guys
When will we reconcile? Isn't it that fast?
I suggest you break it up into paragraphs. It seems so tiring now.
The sentences don't make sense and there are a lot of typos. It must have been written by a primary school student.
This layout is quite long, and the dialogues between the characters are all crowded together. It's really tiring to watch, and the details are still a bit lacking. Keep up the good work!
The original poster had a hard time waiting for the update.
The character of this protagonist needs to be changed. Try to be as concise as possible. Don't be too wordy, especially the inner activities. This way it can be divided into layers. Come on.
When did the princess learn martial arts... Did I miss it...? I said no at Marriage Lake before
There are two strange things here. First, this article should not be Manchu or some other ethnic minority. Why does the title Princess Princess appear at the same time? I don't understand. Shouldn't the daughter of a Han prince be a princess? Secondly, since the protagonist has undergone various transformations and seems to have said that even if the doctor diagnoses the pulse, nothing can be found, then what is the purpose of having Liu Yan'er accompany him? ? ?
Couldn't the layout be better? Looks so tired, pass
These two awkward little guys
When will we reconcile? Isn't it that fast?
I suggest you break it up into paragraphs. It seems so tiring now.