Gu Yan's Reborn Daily Life

I saw my message from seven years ago below this article, and I was filled with emotion

As for the extra episode you mentioned, it's been a week.

It's a bad ending, I thought there would be Gu Yuan's sweet and greasy daily life later on, but the story is good.

I always feel like it's a forced ending.

Let me comment. The author is great and the story line is great, but let me tell you my feelings. It seems that I focus more on how I want to express myself, and ignore the feeling of being a reader. The whole story is scattered, there are many things, but it is also very fragmented. Each one has a different writing style. Maybe because I like this article very much, I always feel that it should be better. There are too many cute points added to the story, but beyond the cute points, the structure and logic of the story are much less. At first glance, Yuan Baobao is the biggest highlight, but he only appears very rarely. Other friends appear a lot, but most of them are passed over in one point. Many things are touched upon, but they do not go into depth. Different from the intentional white space, I feel that the large processing is a bit too shallow, so it feels a bit abrupt. It's limited to my own feelings, but I still like Dada's writing~ As the main attack party, I'll see you again in the future, Dada

? After watching the extra episode, I still feel confused.

The writing is very good~ but it's not enough. It feels like it's never finished. . . This feeling is so cruel

Confused. This is actually over

Suddenly I discovered that the article about the second generation ancestor was also written by the author. I updated it two days ago and found that it ended inexplicably, but the relationship was perfect anyway. What about this one? The whole process is vague and unclear. Can there be a straightforward response to Yuan's feelings? He always looks very calm and indifferent. If the character creation is this characteristic, that's it. Can you treat the relationship the same way? It's too pretentious... I feel very disappointed that this article ended suddenly. Although it is not a v article and does not require mandatory responsibility, I feel that the ending of the second generation is written in a hurry. The end of this article is a forced end. I feel very irresponsible and disappointed with the article.

Wodema! ! Is it over? ! ! What about cp?