The Universe's Most Devoted Dog

I'm so angry so angry!!!! From Bai Lan to Hua Ji to Samuel and Feishen, every Zerg is so cute. Maybe I prefer the Zerg to Monique and Xilian because of the character creation, but I have to say that the author is really awesome. When the sharpest and coldest weapons are paired with the most loyal and soft hearts, and the most unquestionable surrender and enthusiasm for you, who can refuse the cute Zerg? I have always thought that the meaning of creation is because the author accidentally peeked into a magical world - out of love for the characters and the world he wrote, I want to share such a touching story with more people, and I also want you to see the people I love. I thought that you were able to create so many cute and vivid characters because you loved every character in your writing. To be honest, the world view, logical line, power intrigue in this article simply cannot withstand scrutiny, and there are a lot of bugs. I think most of the things I can read and don't care about the intrigue you describe are all because I think the characters are cute... As a person who doesn't like short stories and doesn't like multiple male protagonists, I'm rarely attracted to such multiple male protagonists. Maybe it's because every character doesn't want the heroine, they really just love the heroine. So I don't think it's confusing and messy, I just feel "so good" from the bottom of my heart. However, I thought you gave such an ending to the character you created seriously???? I'm really disappointed. From the halfway point on, it felt like the author was hesitating about the ending, changing the plot he wanted to write in response to the different voices in the comments. But this is your story, and I hope you can write it according to your original intention... You don't like be and don't want the little cuties to die, but you also don't like this hasty ending, okay? I would rather see every story have a beginning and an end. Even if he is be, he will be remembered by everyone, because this is the reasonable ending of this character because of his own experience and personality. What's the matter with you being anticlimactic??? If you can't write a cartoon, don't write it. It gave all the characters that everyone loves such an ending. Real. I rarely comment. I'm so angry. Some authors may not be able to come back with their endings. I can tolerate the world line that was laid out before and I don't know how to close it. At least I can see that they really want to give readers a satisfying ending and they have tried their best, but their writing skills may be average. You are fundamental. Don't want to write. All I can really say about this kind of behavior is that it's a terrible scam. If the story you wrote has such an ending, I think you don't love this article as much as the readers in the comment area. I really feel bad for the character to have a mother like you. I won't scold the author even if you abuse the character, because I think the story needs its own plot. The author may write certain stories that cause readers to feel sorry for the character. He is innocent when he is scolded... You are, and you totally deserve it. You were not scolded because of what you wrote, but because of your attitude. I have really blocked all your articles. I will not read the articles of this kind of author. I still feel sick that I bought your article

Should I order it all? I would like to remind future readers to remember that the author of this book is "Bai Meng" and her trumpet "Eye Has an Umbrella" is said to be hers. Almost all the novels are lame and not updated all year round. Even the few novels that have been completed in two have a rather sloppy ending and are of poor quality.

It made me laugh so hard. Everyone in Jinjiang knows that every text has a life. You, the author, don't know that.

Go back and read the dialogue in the chapter of The Land of Absolute Spirits. Is my wife a devil? ? Qiao Qiao is also the same with Qiao Qiao. They are all good children. Why do you treat them like this? Ye Ling is so sad that he can't go home in the end. He originally came here for the cookies, but in the end he did it like this. As expected, the regretful ending is even more profound.

Author, there is a trap between your demon king and your loyal dog. Don't write in such a specious way... I'm so depressed. I have a heart attack every time.

Where is Yan Linyu? Where is Hua Ji? Where are the loving twins? Where are Bai Bailan???? We will collapse, no, no, I want my white and blue, he is so good, so cute, please make him thicker, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's a good idea, but the author failed to write it down. Author, can't you finish writing him properly? The relationship between the male supporting characters was not fully prepared, the heroine's way home was inexplicably cut off, and the background of the era was not settled. If you don't call this an open ending, you call it a bad ending. It's rare to see such a cute character, who is not obsessed with love and hate, but is trying to care for his own cat and dog. Finally, he understands that the one who loves you most in the world may be your dog. Cats, dogs, bugs, and pets are all so cute. How can you bear to give up on them? Come back and write. Your ending will not be inconsistent at all.

What a rush! ! ! I'll give you one point for the pain (??) Author, please come here and promise not to beat you.

This ending is so perfunctory and confusing.

Finished reading it today. I have some thoughts in my heart. Although I know the author may not have seen them, I still want to share them. I feel that the ending is a bit rushed, and some characters are not explained at all. The daily life in the front is very refreshing, but I always feel that the ending part is a bit lacking in stamina. I feel that the author wants to finish otz quickly. The same is true for the plot. It seems to explain everything to me, but when I think about it carefully, I still feel that it gives me a feeling? ? ? Feeling. As for the political struggle and war that was promised, was it just mentioned in one sentence... Then why did the Machinery Empire's ship appear... (I may not have read this carefully) Then there are the characters... As for Ska Suzi and Mo Yuan... The originally promised Mo Yuan Ska lunch box is not available (of course I am very happy not to have it)... Ah, especially Ska, it seems that she has not appeared since the last time she went to heal. What happened to He Yunjin in the end... It was not explained at all... It gave me the feeling that the author was a little tired after writing the story otz and wanted to finish it quickly. ... And then there is the promised ending. I went to the column and looked at it. It only has one chapter, and it was more than two months ago. I hope to see what happens to the characters afterwards... Overall, it's pretty good... Especially the beginning, which is very refreshing haha. The author's writing style and logical plot are also good, but the personality of the heroine is not very prominent, although I feel that the author is working hard to shape it. Anyway, come on.