After a rain shower, the damp evening breeze brushed the faces of passersby. You leaned on the windowsill, gazing at the mist-shrouded mountaintop in the distance. Lights glimmered in countless homes, like stars fallen to earth. The deep blue night sky was like cool, smooth silk. Below, the dim yellow streetlights and the rain-soaked stone street seemed to reflect another dazzling, colorful world. You saw him walking out of the darkness, a little mist clinging to his hair. His sharply defined features carried a hint of coolness, yet his eyes were as gentle as the night.
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A moment of silence for Su Mo 3s 2333
1 I feel that the characters are quite consistent in various details. 2 I think this article is a slow cooker, with a slow and slow style. I am very adaptable to this rhythm and tonality ~ 3 This is the first article I have read. 4. I looked at the total number of chapters. It will be finished soon. 2333
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So cute, green years
1. I have never felt Honkai Impact, and the characters are very stable. 2. Is the foreplay slow? . This question is difficult to answer. It is true that it is slow, but if you look closely, it is not. I think it is because the writing style gives people a sense of slow flow. In this aspect, I feel there is no need to change w. It is good now. 3. The offensive and defensive attributes of this article are not very distinct. . Others are fine and can be judged 4. . No, there really is no w, but after so many articles, I really don't like this one this time. . The plot and narrative style feel a bit awkward and this article is really offensive. . It doesn't look very comfortable, but it's okay. 5. My favorite is of course Xia Yushi!!! Both male leads are great!!! 1 After reading the full text, both of them seemed to be shining brightly, and they especially liked this kind of attack and reception!
1. I feel that the characters are well grasped, and there is no sense of collapse, but I haven't let go of my efforts in shaping the characters. Personal opinion (づ￣3￣) づ╭
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1. I don't think so at all. Your setting is very rigorous, and the stories are almost all in line with the setting. It can be seen from the author's words that you should be someone who thinks very carefully and keeps repeating confirmation? You did a great job in this, so I won't worry about the issue of collapse at all. Whether it's the words and deeds of the protagonist, the plot, or his thoughts, they are all very consistent. 2. No, because I feel that the characters created by Dan Jin are not the kind of tyrannical, handsome and straightforward CEO attack or super active receiver. Therefore, it takes a certain amount of time and process to slowly develop, be ambiguous, identify, face reality, etc., So it does not feel depressing. In this article, the two characters are not the type to think without thinking, so of course it is difficult to have sex directly. Although I really want to fast forward to sex~~~, but without the previous paving the way, I wouldn't be so in love with these two characters. 3. The attributes of attack and reception are very obvious and can be guessed at a glance. I also feel that there is a difference in the personality of attack and reception, but even if there is no difference, I don't think there is a problem, because it is indeed difficult to see in reality, not to mention that if there are two very strong people, selfishly love this. 4. I can't think of any outstanding shortcomings, but if I want to make it better, I would probably write more about small things other than the relationship between the two of them. It may include breakthroughs at work, or problems encountered in reality. This aspect of family has not been written, but maybe in addition to family relationships, some content can be added (some but not excessively shifting the focus) to enrich the characters, and I can also write more plots in which ordinary interactions may not necessarily lead to progress. I would like it more. 5. In terms of story, I like Cyan Blue Night and White Paper. White Paper is because of its high completeness, and I really like their ordinary little days together; Cyan Blue Night is a short article, but I like the writing style and the transition of the scenes very much. I also like that the life back at school and the current life intersect with each other, giving it a feeling of watching a movie. My favorite Shou is Lin Tian, I really love him to death... I have already talked about loving him in that article before >_
This chapter is really beautiful... It's sweet, beautiful, and picturesque. You can completely imagine them in the snow, with the reflection of the sun shining on them. The cake delivered at the end completely hit my heart. Danjin, a self-proclaimed transparent person, is so good at writing! Whether it's the snow or the cake, there are many images that are constantly circulating in my mind. It's so beautiful!