It's finally finished!! My first story. It had plenty of plot holes, but at least I managed to finish it. That was no easy feat. *wipes sweat*
I've been writing for so long, but honestly, I had so little confidence. Who would want to read such a lousy story? I almost gave up several times. But readers like Xiang Dao Ren, lona_sky, Cang Dong, and so many others were kind enough to leave me comments. Even though they were only a few words, they gave me the motivation to keep writing. I'm truly grateful to you all. *bows*
Theme:
Very depressing to watch. None of the main and supporting characters make me like it. In particular, the heroine's character is very unclear and seems to change. In the first few chapters, it seems that he has seen through the world and disdains the other fish to be attracted to the third prince. In the blink of an eye, he becomes a human and starts to admire the third prince again. He is so excited. In the blink of an eye, he is flirting with that frog again. I feel dizzy~ He always overestimates himself and underestimates his ability, which will only cause trouble. What a nympho+idiot!
It's so annoying, I don't like Mu Chan Palace
Well... This… Is this the end? I really hope that Qiu Lian can talk to the third prince...
By the way, I still need to support and make up for the points.
It's well written and quite realistic. I just came to Jinjiang to read novels, mostly to escape reality~~
"Thinking too much may not necessarily lead to happiness. If you worry about whether you are cheated or not, then how old should it be?" This fish girl thinks very clearly! It's a pity that I just figured it out. Bow to reality, bow deeply.
I don't quite understand what the third prince's feelings are towards Qiu Lian.
There is no explanation of what is going on between humans and demons.
I don't want to read anymore. Mu Changong is clearly not a good man. So what if it was a relationship in the past? I'm dizzy. Dishonest men are not trustworthy.
No matter what others say, I think it's still good~ Spread flowers!