One is a monk who was her childhood sweetheart.
One is a cold and aloof sword immortal master.
One is a wickedly charming young master of the demonic path.
Gu Caidie thought that meeting them was the greatest blessing of her life.
It wasn't until the truth came to light that she realized endless darkness lay behind the sweetness.
As it turned out, hope had never once favored her.
I asked the Buddha: What is fate?
The Buddha said: Fate is everyone you meet in your life.
I asked the Buddha again: What is a tribulation?
The Buddha said: A tribulation is when every one of them is a trap.
Master-disciple romance, 1v1
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I was attracted after reading the copy, even though I haven't read it yet... ^_^
The beginning is not bad, just the copywriting
Although I haven't read the main text, one suggestion for the author is to change the copy. You don't need to change too much, just delete the first three lines. It's really boring and I have no desire to read on.
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[Title of Work]: "Ask the Buddha" [Author's name]: 7,000 words [Work link]: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=2553376 [Reading progress]: Chapter 46 [Commentator]: Pig Piaopiao The title Asking the Buddha suggests that it is a fairy tale and spiritual cultivation work that does not take the usual path. There are also many emotional lines designed in the content. The ignorant childhood feelings between Cai Die and Mo Fanchen gradually faded away as Mo Fanchen's merits were fulfilled. In order to follow in the footsteps of Mo Fanchen, Cai Die went to Tiandao Sect and hoped to become an immortal. By chance, she met Li Zili, the master of swordsmanship. She developed feelings while getting along with the master day and night. Is the relationship between the two a simple master-disciple relationship? Or is it unspeakable love? Presumably there will be a clear conclusion below. Interspersed in the middle is a little-known emotional entanglement between senior brother and uncle Jingqian. Among the early emotional lines, this emotional design is the most comprehensive, with plot, love and hatred, and highlights. From the perspective of character setting, it is a reasonable arrangement to use Cai Die's emotional growth process as the main axis and continuously enrich the plot. But from the perspective of reading experience, it seems that it is a better choice to put the emotional entanglement between the senior brother and junior uncle Jingqian at the beginning. The marriage contract between the senior brother and the young master of Baihua Valley was completely torn up due to a fight. The fight between the two factions of disciples escalated to the point of destroying the marriage contract, which is a good conflict point in itself. Next, the story behind the disfigurement of the senior brother is narrated. It may be a greater opportunity, and of course it can also explain the relationship between the senior brother and senior uncle Jing Qian. Such a plot with obvious conflicts and no contradiction is obviously better to capture the hearts of readers if it is placed at the beginning. Moreover, judging from the current design of the article, the relationship between Master Jingqian and the heroine Cai Die is very close. Jingqian has a special status and can be regarded as the second female lead, so it makes sense to place it at the beginning of the article. In terms of character creation, the young heroine is indeed relatively soft and cute, and her violent side is not shown at all. Maybe there will be a big change in the later period, which should be a good point to watch. As one of the characters who has an emotional entanglement with the heroine, the image of the swordsman master is not three-dimensional enough. He has shown his cold and defensive characteristics through many examples, but his inner psychological state has not been shown. For example, the relationship between Hua Qiangu and Bai Zihua is also an emotional entanglement between master and disciple. It has always been said that if it is not cleaned up, it will still be a mess, but Bai Zihua's heart is for the common people, and his feelings for Qiangu can only be indescribable, so there will be Qiangu's sacrifice, and Bai Zihua's choices and decisions also appear to be logical. At present, the swordsman master in the article seems to be a very violent person, and he does not have so many worries about doing things. It seems that the relationship between him and the young heroine can be expressed more clearly. In short, this article is slightly different from the general fairy tale cultivation works. The emotional design is richer and more delicate, the fighting and upgrading routines have been omitted, and the philosophical chicken soup or insights on life do not seem to be reflected. Overall, the content is not consistent enough with the literary and artistic title. However, the plot design is unique and has many interesting points. There is a long road ahead, and I hope the author will make greater progress.
There are too many things going on recently and I'm very busy, so I don't have time to update, so I'm here to take a leave of absence. I haven't even done my homework yet, now I have to do my homework Hi~ o(*￣▽￣*)ブ
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I came here to ask for leave and have two days of rest, mainly because I want to wait for Thursday's list. After Thursday's list change, I will update three chapters that night, so don't abandon me! Love you
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