I have reincarnated through a hundred lifetimes, all because of one unwavering obsession. Reborn in another world in this life, I shall use the sword in my hand to cut down every obstacle on the road ahead.
POV female protagonist, but you wrote about a male character
The sense of immersion is relatively strong, the content is quite novel, and overall it is pretty good, but there are still some minor flaws. Each chapter is like countless keystrokes on the keyboard. I don't want it to be too big, nor do I want the work to be buried here. Maybe I can provide you with a good choice. I am an editor, you can find me to buckle: Yi Lin Wu Wu Wu Er Lin Qi Liu Liu Lin, I believe you will not be disappointed!
POV female protagonist, but you wrote about a male character
The sense of immersion is relatively strong, the content is quite novel, and overall it is pretty good, but there are still some minor flaws. Each chapter is like countless keystrokes on the keyboard. I don't want it to be too big, nor do I want the work to be buried here. Maybe I can provide you with a good choice. I am an editor, you can find me to buckle: Yi Lin Wu Wu Wu Er Lin Qi Liu Liu Lin, I believe you will not be disappointed!