Ziyun was sure that following an immortal was a very wise decision, even if the immortal before her was shameless and devious.
That was, until she was mistaken for a boy...
When the inn's waiter stood before them and saw the handsome young man in white with his arm around a shy little book servant, as bashful as a maiden, his expression was more excited than if he'd discovered a gold mine.
"At last, a real pair of men who love men! Young master, you certainly have excellent taste. You two guests want one room, right? Our bed frames aren't very sturdy, so please go easy on them, nice and easy."
Even so, Ziyun still believed there was plenty to eat when you followed an immortal whose magic was boundless.
That was, until the two of them got stuck in quicksand...
"I've discovered that my immortal powers are gone," said the immortal, buried in the quicksand, calmly.
The girl, also buried in the quicksand, stared at the immortal in disbelief, then burst into miserable tears. "I don't want to die with you!"
Note: The heroine is a bit naive. The hero is a bit devious, ahem... The story has a lighthearted tone, and I swear neither the male nor female lead will suffer. Readers, please be gentle with your criticism, nice and gentle.
Great, this is Susu. It took me a long time to come, I'm sorry≧≦
The overall composition of the story is good and full of fairy tale flavor, which is great. The relationship between Li An and Ziyun is also quite interesting. I feel like Li An is developing his wife≧≦
But Ziyun gave me the feeling that she was a bit naive and ignorant. Although I knew that Ziyun was indeed young, I still felt that she didn't understand anything. How should I put it, it's just a bit of a noob.
However, the plot is still good, and it reads smoothly without any awkwardness. And the characters are very distinct. Especially the part where Li An is jealous⊙▽⊙
Then we need to pay attention to describing the growth of Ziziyun and the attitude of the heaven after leaving the lower realm of An.
Overall it's great, cheers≧≦
I'm jumping at the bottom of the article again, haha. The happiest thing about following the article is seeing your updates.
Awesome, the plot looks good
M live, chase text ING
Why do I feel that Shangxian is a bit cute, haha
Your writing has the feel of a movie and TV show. Will the Demon Lord be rough again in the future? Will there be any scenes?
Twilling is very hard, come on and support you till the end.
Come on, come on, I will support you till the end.
I've used it a lot... Haha
Only four chapters have been updated, so I don't know what the essence of the writing is like.
Great, this is Susu. It took me a long time to come, I'm sorry≧≦ The overall composition of the story is good and full of fairy tale flavor, which is great. The relationship between Li An and Ziyun is also quite interesting. I feel like Li An is developing his wife≧≦ But Ziyun gave me the feeling that she was a bit naive and ignorant. Although I knew that Ziyun was indeed young, I still felt that she didn't understand anything. How should I put it, it's just a bit of a noob. However, the plot is still good, and it reads smoothly without any awkwardness. And the characters are very distinct. Especially the part where Li An is jealous⊙▽⊙ Then we need to pay attention to describing the growth of Ziziyun and the attitude of the heaven after leaving the lower realm of An. Overall it's great, cheers≧≦
I'm jumping at the bottom of the article again, haha. The happiest thing about following the article is seeing your updates.
Awesome, the plot looks good
M live, chase text ING
Why do I feel that Shangxian is a bit cute, haha
Your writing has the feel of a movie and TV show. Will the Demon Lord be rough again in the future? Will there be any scenes?
Twilling is very hard, come on and support you till the end.
Come on, come on, I will support you till the end.
I've used it a lot... Haha
Only four chapters have been updated, so I don't know what the essence of the writing is like.