This story was originally posted in the Baidu Tieba forum for Echizen Ryoma, and I've moved it here today. I hope you enjoy it.
I was inspired by the recently popular drama Love Through a Millennium. I hope you'll give me lots of suggestions, and come transmigrate across dimensions with Alarui for a romantic love story with Ryoma. The heroine's name is very Mary Sue, but I still hope you'll give the story a chance.
This is my first time writing a story, so please give me plenty of guidance. Suggestions are welcome, but please don't make personal attacks. My writing is still rather immature, so please bring your warning signs. Mwah!
Theme:
Demining: Gao Jie's 1v1 party ran away overnight. If you don't believe it, just read Chapter 70
Just want to say, do it. . . The heroine is not worthy of Ryoma;
I want to read Ryoma's extras (●\'?\'●)??, And this book is really good~ but there are some repetitions in some places. To be honest, there are quite a lot. If you have time, I think you should edit it. л??????? (?????)?
In Sakurano's confession, "How did that girl meet Moli?" Damn, did you make a typo?
Some places are repetitive~For example, this chapter is where Ryoma hums
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha It's been a long time since I've seen an article written by Wang Wang with such a unique style of painting. Come on, author.
The punctuation marks are so messed up, many sentences end without periods... And girls should use her, I don't know why he is used...
Some sentences don't seem to make sense and need to be revised...
Demining: Gao Jie's 1v1 party ran away overnight. If you don't believe it, just read Chapter 70
Just want to say, do it. . . The heroine is not worthy of Ryoma;
I want to read Ryoma's extras (●\'?\'●)??, And this book is really good~ but there are some repetitions in some places. To be honest, there are quite a lot. If you have time, I think you should edit it. л??????? (?????)?
In Sakurano's confession, "How did that girl meet Moli?" Damn, did you make a typo?
Some places are repetitive~For example, this chapter is where Ryoma hums
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha It's been a long time since I've seen an article written by Wang Wang with such a unique style of painting. Come on, author.
The punctuation marks are so messed up, many sentences end without periods... And girls should use her, I don't know why he is used... Some sentences don't seem to make sense and need to be revised...