Girls Can Be Infinite Terror Too

It's already 2020. . .

Author, do you want to update every year? T^T

Resolutely ask for deductions! Deductions!

Does Xiaoran hate the person himself?

Even if it is a quarterly update, there should be two more updates... TAT

Is it still useful to call out the author in this article? I'm so stupid, really, that I shouldn't have been curious from the beginning when I found out that the last update was in September 2010...

Receive the article and leave a comment Chapter 7 Leave a comment: It's rare to see a fanfic that doesn't feature infinitely terrifying characters. This novel is written very realistically. There is no golden finger of the author, no subplots or superpowers at your fingertips. Instead, it completely describes the journey of ordinary people struggling in infinite terror, which is very rare. But also because it is very realistic, the actions of the two veterans are a bit depressing. However, from the perspective of the back, it seems that the two have not lost their conscience, but have been hardened by this terrifying world. I believe that their attitudes towards the protagonist will slowly change in the future. Just looking at the copy, Shen Yujie is only mentioned (I just want to ask if Sentence Jie is pronounced xie or jie?), But the keyword for the protagonist is "Loliran". The first article was narrated from Shen's perspective at the beginning, but the plot from Loli's perspective was mixed in the middle, which was a bit strange. A good novel should make readers nervous, sad, sad, and happy because of the tension of the characters. Frequently changing the perspectives of each character will make it difficult for readers to have a sense of involvement, so third-person novels are basically based on the perspective of one protagonist. Of course, it is not impossible to write from two perspectives and three perspectives, but it is not easy to grasp. Authors with enough experience can also write well. The author's writing style is good, so whether it is Loli or Shen's perspective, I can more or less feel the tension of the life-and-death struggle. However, the sudden switch and only a small part of the switch are a bit disorienting, because I have been immersed in Shen's thinking for a long time at the beginning. The sudden switch to Loli's thinking is surprising. Once I got used to Loli's thinking, I immediately returned to Shen's perspective. If Shen is the protagonist, things like what happened to Loli can actually be summarized and summarized by recalling them to the two of them when they return to the main god space. If Shen and Luo Li are both protagonists who must be described emphatically, I think they can use the same ink. For example, one person's perspective can be repeated in one chapter. After all, if one is more and one is less, it will be difficult for an experienced author to grasp the degree, which will lead to the problem I mentioned in the previous paragraph. The previous plot is very compact, and the two chapters after returning to the main god space have a bit of a verbal narrative, when several people introduce each other. Of course, I think these may be the author's beautiful memories, so I want to write them out. I can understand, but the writing style is not the same as the previous chapters. Then the reason why I read Chapter 7 first was because of the problem of perspective switching. In this chapter, the roles changed too many times. I counted them. The first one was Shen, then Loli, then Shen again, then Mo, and finally Loli again. I didn't react immediately when Shen turned to Lolita and Mo turned to Lolita. After reading a few paragraphs, I realized that the characters had changed. The reason why I was able to react to the transitions in the middle was mainly because you added separators. My suggestion to you is, first of all, Mo is just a supporting character (or is he the male protagonist? But his role does not seem to be as important as the other two, and his perspective has never appeared before, which seems very abrupt). There is no need to write about his perspective. You can also ask him to narrate, explain and summarize the past when the two girls see his android. Next is Loli and Shen. If you have to write about both, you can merge the two perspectives of Shen and the two perspectives of Loli, otherwise the switching will be too frequent. Except for the problem of frequent perspective changes, the writing and plot description of this novel are good, and it has enough capital to attract readers. I will continue to read it. I hope the author will work hard! Sweat, I've written a growth review without realizing it? So actually I never read romance novels in JJ, and I can still read the Infinite series. One more question, isn't this article Lily? I think the interaction between Loli and Shen is quite lily... Especially the jealous part in Chapter 7. Could it be that Shen is actually jealous of Mo? So I went back to read the copy and found that the label was indeed romance. I wiped my sweat...

I crawled over and took a look, and sure enough I was tricked again. Dear Ran, I really saw you right...

The beginning is quite interesting, but what about some places...