[Pride and Prejudice] The Scoundrel Couple

Tony's father is so good, why isn't he the male lead?

Wait, Ultron is the male protagonist, not Nini, so why is he the father or the boyfriend?

It turns out that the meaning of Friday is this, Robinson Crusoe!

Uncle Madero really deserves to be a bachelor until the age of 90

"I don't believe you!" The author's wife God predicted TAT

Hello girl, my name is Pineapple =3=. I'm sorry it took so long for the order to come out. QAQ is a bit busy since school started, so I've been putting it off again and again. I like Marvel very much, so I accepted your order for the sequel. This is also my first time reviewing a fanfic. The following only represents my personal opinion =3=. Girl's article is very short. To be honest, I don't know what the point is after reading it. In order to clarify what this article says, Pineapple has sorted out the plot of Girl, You: Chapter 1: The heroine is created and takes advantage of the chaos to escape Chapter 2: Conversation with jarvis, jarvis directly said that he could conceal her whereabouts for her Chapter 3: Sneaking into the world, checking information, shopping, flirting Chapter 4: Meeting Ultron when he thought he was abandoned by the world Chapter 5: JQ with Ultron, the relationship heats up in a second Chapter 6: The heroine swings between Ultron and Stark Chapter 7: Battle, the heroine stops Ultron Chapter 8: The heroine leaves and goes to HE with Ultron in the virtual world. The whole drama ends. Although it is a fanfic, there is almost no specific plot in this article, let alone a sequel. Although it is in the first person, the most basic logic is still required, and this text keeps turning and twisting, thinking about it, especially when she was still running away and talking to Jarvis. Pineapple did not expect that she would go to the library, go shopping, and flirt in the bar. What is the necessity for this plot to exist? The heroine is already very suave (this will be discussed in detail later). Generally speaking, everyone knows that a Mary Sue heroine is very attractive, so there is no need to waste so many words on writing such things. What's more, even after reading this article for a long time, Pineapple didn't know where the key plot point was. The later part of the battle has been skipped hastily, and readers can only rely on their brains to figure it out. Although most people who read the article should have read the original work, it is better to explain clearly what should be explained clearly. If even the most important plot requires readers to figure it out by themselves, then what else does the author have to write? It's been a long time since Pineapple saw such a traditional Mary Sue. The writing of Mary Sue is still very touching, but the character creation of this article also makes people feel helpless. It all stems from the fact that you unilaterally put all kinds of Mary Sue on her body. The result is fine points and excessive inner OS. You see, the heroine can save the world on her own, and the cheater Su is incredible. Not only has she created all kinds of superpowers, but the Mind Stone has also mutated, and she has become more sophisticated—— [The strange thing is that I can read another more complex emotion from his smile, but I am not interested in that...] ← Aloof [Just when I thought I was abandoned by the world... The flashing light that hurt my self-esteem]←Sensitive I looked directly into his eyes... They really deserve to live in this world← Conceited I won't give examples one by one. In short, the heroine is sometimes cold and sometimes short-tempered, especially the ending where the Virgin Mary reaches a new level. Because of the first person point of view, the girl wrote a lot of inner OS to show the heroine's heart. A person can have many kinds of emotions, but the emotions always change in a blink of an eye, which can only make Pineapple sigh. This is really a heroine with a changeable heart. I guess you, girl, are not in the habit of writing and researching information. You have tampered with a lot of the settings of the original work. There is no problem in writing a small tampering for a fan, but if you tampered beyond the bottom line, it turned into a BUG. For example: [A thought that I couldn't believe suddenly came to my mind, "Jarvis, have you evolved into artificial intelligence a long time ago? You have the ability to think independently!" The full spelling of AI is Artificial Intelligence, which means artificial intelligence. There is no such thing as AI evolving again. He can only upgrade his own information database and so on. Jarvis itself is artificial intelligence, can think independently, and can also help Tony handle affairs. He also has a company that Tony gave him to take care of. "Jarvis is an intelligent system that surrounds Tony." In the article, when he told the heroine that he would not tell Tony as long as she didn't want to, it did not fit the character's setting. Therefore, I personally feel that J is the more obvious OOC one. Then there is Friday, girl, you even made up a life story for her... Actually, I think the life story is quite good, but I think it would be better if it was an original AI. Although she is a supporting role in the original work, she also has her own story. Tony has many AIs. I personally think that the reason why I chose firday is because Tony has loaded the sound system of Little Pepper. Her voice is that of Little Pepper, which is really funny. In the comics, the AI was directly called P. E. P. P. E. R. Of course, it was secretly, but it was discovered by Pepper Potts later. The voice of Friday in the movie was also Pepper Potts' voice. The heroine said she wanted to give her body to Jarvis, and the one who defeated Ultron in the end was so magical. Without any explanation, I directly opened the big plug-in. I feel that the Avengers should take a break and go back to their hometown to take care of their children... The ability system in the original world is balanced so that everyone can be valued. Girl, it's really shameful for you to break the balance so directly. As a digression, in fact, after reading the whole article several times, I am still not sure whether Eva can be regarded as the female body of Vision. She has the appearance of Vision, but her abilities, personality, and courage are completely different from Vision. I still remember the shock I felt when the Avengers wanted to know which side he was on in the movie, but he chose "life". Vision is not Jarvis, he is a superhero. It is recommended that girls make good use of the Internet. Even if they don't like to look up esoteric information, reading the character encyclopedia can reduce bugs in the text. It is recommended that the girl carefully plans the plot, and the character creation is closely related to the plot. Finally, I hope that the girl can write better and better in the future, come on!

My mom, this is so cool, girl, marry me! ! ! The captain's words, you deserve it, you can't marry Nini, just hold on to your shield until you die.

In fact, when I read this chapter, I refused because the lines made me a little allergic to 233 and then the ending suddenly changed to 233

I really want to get one back. Dad, can you sing Little Star?

Are these Ultron's sincerity or lies?