A man who can't have the one he wants, and a straight guy getting bent (?): seme X (?) uke. Fill in the blanks (*^__^*) I'm no good at writing blurbs, so I guess the above is the blurb. A deep bow to everyone who came across this story, and thank you! Okay, I'm rambling again. One last thing: you can find more completed stories here. If you don't mind, please add them to your collection too (^-^)V Every addition is an encouragement!!! Oh, right, updates come every day at noon. Even if nobody reads it, I still wanted to say so (*^__^*)
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You must continue writing!!! The growth is obvious! For the sake of my first long review (it counts, right?), Come on, there are bound to be thorns on the road to success, and you have to endure loneliness.
Today I read it in one go and found that I am not confident. I have a few things to say. Traditionally, suppress first and then increase. 1 Does have a lot of shortcomings and many shortcomings. The two most outstanding points are: First, the time span is unpredictable, which is reflected in the fact that the college years interspersed in the middle are rushed and unprepared. The four years when I returned to my hometown with Shoujun, it is hard to imagine that four years have passed by in just one stroke. Second, it collapsed a little in the later period. My daily writing was scattered and scattered, with no structural framework. It was very impetuous! 2. The text is very plain, and some sentences are very clever. Well, I admit that I quite like watching the protagonist complain. It has a sense of life and is great! 3. The emotional processing is generally good. I don't find it inexplicable or unable to be funny. Love is also traceable, which I think is very important. 4. The character of the protagonist is very realistic, and there is no exaggeration or bloody nonsense like the usual novel routines. 5 Most importantly, I saw comments about the topic of how the children are doing and whether they are in the closet. I think it's easy to understand. First of all, the text setting is a best man joke. It can be seen that Shou is actually very cowardly in his treatment of emotions, and he can also be said to be kind. But the kinder the person, the more stubborn he may be. This is reflected in the fact that four years later, Xiao Gong came into the house, and the little spark in Shoujun's heart began to flutter again. Of course, when it comes to children here, marriage is a fait accompli, shouldn't we have children? Is it abnormal to have no children? [Of course, I cannot deny that not having children is more in line with the image of pure love in readers' minds. As for the fact that the children are not biological, it is a big problem for the author. . . Then when it comes to attacking people, it is understandable. A person who frequently thinks of him after his marriage and divorce must have an unusual status in his heart, and he is no longer pure. . . Suddenly someone came who claimed to be a boyfriend [I guess the tone of both parties here must be bad] In Xiao Gong's view, this is already considered a personal insult to Shou Jun! And I guessed that Xiao Gong must have felt a huge sense of disparity when he heard these words [later, Xiao Gong recalled that he was afraid of seeing Xiao Shou and was afraid that he was already married and had children], so I simulated Gong's psychological activities like this: I have been looking for him for a long time and was afraid that Shou would have a wife. You said you were his boyfriend as soon as you came. Isn't this asking for a fight?!! As for the deep cabinet or not, I don't agree. Nowadays, most of the people who are in the closet are those who don't want to admit that they have developed homophobia. Xiao Gong here has not figured it out at all! 6 [Note: Personal opinion] I think this article does have a big jump. The part about college life is very good, but the part about returning to hometown to heal the wounds is obviously not enough. Personally, I think that the development of the route should include a narration of Shoujun's college life when he was dejected after fleeing back to his hometown. While recalling and feeling sad, he tried to forget, polished the story a lot, and tried to express Shoujun's emotional direction in the most euphemistic way possible. Then the days went on, interspersed with fun with Xiao Ming and other gay friends, and that new friend who was a little serious. Then the small attack appears, and the details here need to be paid attention to. Shou's acceptance of father and son is too high, not even a little bit excessive, which weakens the four years even more. People should change. Shou still likes him in his heart, but he still has to pretend on face, otherwise he won't get used to it without being overly respectful. . . 7 I wouldn't be happy if I didn't stew the meat!!! You must know that a good piece of meat plays an important role in a novel!!! I firmly believe it! Come on! Very well written, great (⊙o⊙)!!!
Love rivals can still happily eat together ╰_╯. Li Chun brings a little bun and Yu Ning doesn't have any negative emotions at all. From the beginning, he treats her like his own son. I feel that Yu Ning's acceptance ability is not ordinary! This heart is bigger than that of the prime minister! I'm almost tired and don't love anymore!
I'm going! What happened? Didn't Xiaofang and Xiao Liu just meet in the last chapter? This chapter is so intimate! The time span is too big, at least give me an obvious reminder! The author is big o_O
It's interesting, let's just accept Xiao Liu! Haha, strike while the iron is hot! ㄟ(￣▽￣ㄟ)
Is Fang Yuning a sufferer? (⊙o⊙)
Come on⊙⊙, the ending is tragic? I always feel that Li Chun should know that the protagonist likes him, right?!