Bai Luowei accidentally brought home a snake-brained young man, and from then on, he refused to leave her alone... Yep! Entering cute-pet mode and begging for cuddles... Supposedly, the male lead is sometimes like this: like this: sometimes he's like this: like this: Female lead: →_→ So what the heck is this male lead, anyway? Foolish author: ⊙﹏⊙ "Chaotic" is the one word for it, and I'll only say it once! Reader's guide: 1. This story is silly and zany... Hmm? I mean cute! 2. QAQ... The foolish author has no grasp of logic, poor writing, and a white-lotus heroine. Please go easy on me with the criticism! 3. Locked chapters unlock one per day. Updates follow the rankings while the story is listed, and are daily when it isn't. (I'll take a day off if something comes up.) 4. Updates every evening between 7 and 8~~~~~ Please don't check the rankings!
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Is the male protagonist not likable? Currently, the male supporting actor seems to be more likable?
I feel that Sang Qianmo looks a lot like Luo Xi.
He really is a cold young man!
This chapter made me feel like I still have Lily tendencies.
The boy who was beaten was Nanzhu, right? It still feels quite cold.
Does the head teacher like Luo Wei? Hey, I don't really like teacher-student relationships.
Mr. Chang Ping has arrived! First, the review of an article starts with the title and cover of the copy. The cover and copy are both great, match well, and look great. However, the name is a bit literary. It seems that the literary and down-to-earth names in Jinjiang are more attractive to readers? Judging from the clicks on this article, I feel that the author lacks exposure for this article. It seems that Dada has signed a contract with Jinjiang, and it is recommended to apply for the list. After all, the exposure of articles that have not been included in the list is low, and it is even more difficult for literary titles to attract readers. Secondly, looking at the time, the author's update time is too unstable, and it is easy to lose readers of the article. Enough nonsense, let's start commenting on the article. Several problems can be seen at the beginning. First of all, this article has a tragic ending. BE is an ending that many people want to write, but it is also difficult to deal with. How to make readers resonate with the author, grieve with the sadness of the characters in the article, and how to make readers truly understand that this BE is a difficult place to deal with. I look forward to seeing how this aspect is dealt with. Secondly, this article seems to be a flashback. We also saw the ending of the whole story BE from the flashback. Furthermore, the large characters are beautiful and carefully crafted. But to be honest, the soul of an article is the first three chapters of the article. Of course, for some readers, it is the first ten chapters and for others it is the first chapter. Generally speaking, let's consider it the first chapter. The first chapter of the big chapter can be summarized in one sentence: the male protagonist is dead. Except for the death of the male protagonist, I didn't see anything else mentioned in the first chapter. Such a beginning personally didn't appeal to me that much. I feel that those beautiful words should be simplified appropriately, or it would be better to add some explosive points in the first chapter. However, I have to admit that there is a lot of suspense in this interrupted position of the big card. The complex relationships and entanglements between the male protagonist, the female partner, and other characters, as well as some previous foreshadowings, the author's writing skills are very good, I like it. Then in the article, the heroine's feeling towards the hero and his male counterpart when they first meet is inexplicably different from the original indifferent image of the heroine. Of course, it may also be because I misinterpreted the image of the heroine. Furthermore, there are a lot of psychological descriptions of the heroine in the novel, and they are somewhat repetitive. For example, the heroine is not willing to trust new friends, which may be a foreshadowing of the later chapters. However, the multiple appearances in the previous chapters sometimes make the heroine appear a bit pretentious. The image of the heroine's friend is very vivid! I have to say that, like someone else, I had the illusion that this was a Lily article. But the heroine has a good character, I give it a thumbs up. However, some of the author's articles have some ambiguities that affect reading. It is recommended to revise them Secondly, being able to write campus essays in the days when campus essays were so cold, my great courage and other aspects are also worthy of praise. The writing is beautiful, and the plot seems to be getting more and more attractive later on. For the sake of the little angels in the row below, I must keep up the good work and keep reading! Many people are waiting! I also very much agree with the idea that slow work produces careful work! Hope to update soon! Come on! Your little angels will continue to support you every step of the way! I wish Sakura will get better and better and successfully attract more angels who like to read this type of article~
I like beautiful writing, but this is not Lily writing. (I'm not afraid that you'll have to work slower. Slow work will produce fine work.)
Xueman is here, and I have time to slowly chew on the youthful and ignorant love on campus. I hope that Fei Se will bring us a different touch and a different first love. Well, come on!
To put it bluntly, it looks great!